[Uraboku] Stalemate

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Stalemate
Author: masanami
Character(s): Senshirou/Kuroto
Word Count: 1,235
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Summary: Senshirou and Kuroto play shogi and try to ignore all the problems between them.
Author's Note: My first attempt at some Senshirou/Kuroto ♥ We'll see how this goes...I'm still figuring out their characters^^

Comments

[tsubakig]

It'a a good attempt (:
I was hoping someone could write one & now i finally get to see one *cheers*

I love your style of writing, it keeps my eye on the screen, reading your fanfics :D
Thanks for sharing this *bow*
Hope that there are more Senshirou/Kuroto fanfics in the future! (not missing out Hotsuma/Shusei as well ~♥)

I think uraboku's episode 20 will make Senshirou/Kuroto more famous /(>w<)/
*fangirl jumping*

[masanami]

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying my writing style^^ I try hard :) I will definitely write more Senshirou/Kuroto fics along with my Hotsuma/Shusei ones. I'm kinda addicted to writing for this series like no one's business haha.

and yes I think episode 20 gave them a lot of new fans ♥

[masanami]

bb when you fangirl over my writing it makes me grin so much :)

GAH I GUESS I NEED TO WRITE MORE SENSHIROU/KUROTO AND HOTSUMA/SHUSEI WHERE THERE IS DOUBLE DATING AND ICE CREAM AND CUTENESS ♥ I have been inspired from our Dreilt chats.

♥

[masanami]

yaaaaay~

I LOVELOVELOVE IT. gah askjdhasjh why are those four so awesome?? I can't take that level of awesome!!

[masanami]

I hope you still write for them! I wannnnt to read something more about them <333

[ragingfirefall]

Lovely! :D I think you've got a very good grasp of their characters, especially considering the circumstances (this being your first fic about them and there being comparatively little canon material to judge them by). There were so many moments I loved - Kuroto trying to catch the bus and being led back inside by Senshiro, for example. The kind of moments we don't know occurred in their history, but that I can so easily imagine did, thanks to your excellent writing. <3

[masanami]

askjdhsjkhd thank you! I really appreciate the kind words. I'm glad they seemed in character, especially since the first bit of writing for them is always so tentative while I get used to their characters...I loved the idea of Kuroto trying to leave Senshirou but in the end being unable to actually get on the bus and leave...and only finally able to go when Senshirou is there to guide him. SIGH. I love the struggle of that.

I definitely see Kuroto as being the type to passive accept Senshirou's love. I think he doesn't really no what to do, and kinda rebels, whenever Senshirou is too forward^^

<333

[masanami]

haha I DO want to write a double date fic. Must find time for that among the other things I want to write and scanlating and going on vacation LOL

What game would that be? I doubt Senshiro is referring to the shogi game. Senshiro wants Kuroto to open up to him, to talk to him and his actions prove it even better than his words.

I used that as kind of a double ended statement. It reflects back to the fact that they are playing the game of shogi, but in reality there is a deeper game being played between them..there is Senshirou trying to get Kuroto to talk about what he's feeling and there's Kuroto not wanting to open up and talk about it. Kuroto is getting annoyed because he can't talk about it and won't accept Senshirou's companionship (i.e. being someone he can talk to) and thus they are dodging each other in some aspects...much like playing a game :) anyway, I think you got that haha <3

[masanami]

Thank you^^