Yule Ball

Dec 18, 2007 00:54



Challenge Sixteen: Holiday Drabbles & Drawbles
Author: seaislewitch
Wizard/Witch: Draco Malfoy/Pansy Parkinson
Rating/Warnings: G/PG
Prompt: #38 Yule Ball

Nervous about my first date, I paced in the shadows, waiting for the ideal moment to make my entrance ( Read more... )

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redvelvetcanopy December 18 2007, 11:59:21 UTC
I can just picture this! My favourite part was the dashing smile he couldn't repress just before he regained control.

What did he say???

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seaislewitch December 18 2007, 15:40:35 UTC
Originally, it read something like this: After years of studying his face, I would know his impression of me the instant I saw him. There wasn't enough words to have it all.

What did he say? Oh, you know!

Thanks for reading, RVC.

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redvelvetcanopy December 18 2007, 18:19:30 UTC
Yes, I think I do. :)

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gelsey December 18 2007, 15:56:26 UTC
I want to know what he said too!

Very nice drabble. The first person POV was very nice.

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seaislewitch December 19 2007, 05:58:50 UTC
He said she looked pretty!

I love to read and write first person POV.

Thanks for reading!

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somigliana December 18 2007, 17:09:05 UTC
Me too, I want to know too!

Draco and Pansy are lovely in this piece - Draco's still young and hasn't learnt to school those facial expressions yet. So cute.

I agree with Jas. First person was very refreshing to read.

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seaislewitch December 19 2007, 06:00:29 UTC
"You look pretty." (He's only fourteen. lol)

Yes, he's not as smooth as he will be at 21.

I enjoy first person too. Thanks for reading!

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ladywhitehart December 18 2007, 17:32:34 UTC
I love that he had her so flustered she didn't even hear what he said.

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seaislewitch December 19 2007, 06:02:29 UTC
*giggles* At fourteen, Pansy is still naive, and all that blood rushing makes it difficult to concentrate.

Thanks for reading. :)

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lewlinx December 25 2007, 23:24:44 UTC
A missing moment from 4th year!!

Its a good thing Pansy had confident!Draco to guide her and make her feel good :D

I love this!

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seaislewitch May 8 2008, 21:50:30 UTC
*giggles* Yes, I imagine they rely on each others strengths at different times. That's how I've always perceived Draco & Pansy.

Thanks for reading!

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