Surreality

[seaislewitch]

***WARNING: DH SPOILERS***

Challenge Fifteen: Deathly Hallows Missing Scenes
Title: Surreality
Author: seaislewitch
Wizard/Witch: Draco Malfoy/Pansy Parkinson
Rating/Warnings: PG-13/R for mildly sexual, non-graphic situations
Genre: Romance/Despair
Word count: 1500 exactly
DH Chapter: Chapter Thirty - The Sacking of Severus Snape
Summary: The Dark Lord is

Comments

[somigliana]

That fits in so perfectly with the new canon. It adds new perspective into what Pansy was thinking when she pointed Harry out in the Great Hall.

And the beginning moment between Pansy and Draco was beautifully written (guh, lucky Pansy).

And as always, your dialogue is so realistic and flows so well that I can hear them speaking in my mind when I read it :)

[seaislewitch]

*g* I've always thought Draco was the lucky one.

Yes, that is exactly why I wrote it this way. It sets up what we see in the Great Hall and the Room of Requirement.

Thanks, somigliana, for your lovely complements.

[gelsey]

I loved the beginning bit especially. Totally, completely hot. Guh, as Cilla said.

I really do love your Pansy and Draco. They're so real and wonderful. I can't write dialogue that flows half that well. Great job, again.

[seaislewitch]

I like writing them arguing or having intimate moments. *g* I'm happy it shows.

Thanks for reading, proof-reading and commenting, gelsey. *hugs*

[subversa]

It's so utterly amazing to think that Draco and Pansy can hold onto their love for one another in spite of the horrible uncertainty in which they live. He is torn by his love for Pansy and his parents, desperately looking for ways to keep them safe and to get out of it all alive. You made it very real for me.

[seaislewitch]

That's exactly the desperation I try to convey, and I'm happy it comes across as intended. Thanks for reading and leaving such a lovely comment, subvers.

[dustthouart]

Because the pun has to be made:
The Dark Lord is coming... so Draco didn't get to.
XD
I have a dirty mind.
Anyway. Loved this as usual. :D

[redvelvetcanopy]

Ha!

OMG, I hate to butt in, but this was just above my comment and I couldn't help myself.

[seaislewitch]

*giggles*

[seaislewitch]

LMAO!!! I seem to be doing that to him a lot lately! Poor wizard!

Thanks for reading, dustthouart.

[redvelvetcanopy]

You've made this dovetail so very well with Deathly Hallows and your own work. It's truly remarkable. I like that you kept Pansy and Draco true to their canon roots. I can see how this fits then with the epilogue that you wrote, too!

[seaislewitch]

Yes, yes, yes! That's exactly what I was doing. I adore the pairing, as you well know.

Thanks for reading, redvelvetcanopy.