fic: got all your numbers

[romancandles]

shecrows is finally watching Prime Suspect and I guess I celebrated by writing porn. This is straight up sex. Sex that I wrote sober too, which you can definitely tell because I'm a bit blushing virgin about the whole thing and normally I'm like yeah take it bitch! stick it where it fits! yeah, suck that dick like a low-rent porno. Apparently I even need a

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[redinteriors]

I was going to say that I was offended my name wasn't mentioned in your intro paragraph, but then I saw it in the tags so I GUESS YOU ARE OKAY. I G U E S S .

That said OMGGGHGHRGJRGHWJHFHJGH UGH THIS IS SO GR89!!!!! Dude, these bros drunkenly getting it on is all I need in life. And lol even though this is basically PWP, there's still a very real and subtle exploration of their relationship that you've woven into the story that makes so much richer and rewarding to read. Plus all the little details, like Lou neatly placing his clothes away, even drunk, cholesterol medication - and the way you've managed to capture their banter and have them engage in this way but still very much in character is just SO GOOD ugh.

There are so many lines I love in this.

It’s hot, a guy like Lou, all sharp edges and firecrackers going soft and open under him.

JUST. Y E S S S S S S SS S S S SSSSSSSSSSS. It is s u p e r hot, okay.

Except - except there’s no where really to go and it’s all a little too symbolic, in the threshold of the bedroom, feet from the bed; Augie’s not the guy that can’t close. Also the angle is really killing his elbow.

AUGHHHHHH, AUGIE FEELS!!!!!! And then straight back into lightening the mood, which is just classic Augie, ugh perfect.

Crying forever @ like wow me, asshole. and GOD just all the times that they tease and mock each other, how you gently touched upon Augie's trepidation, how he's wanted this for years; it makes me so happy that you captured those moments so brilliantly and perfectly and U G H ALL OF MY FEELS WRAPPED UP IN A SUPER HOT PIECE OF WRITING.

MORGAN, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FOR MEEEEEEEEEEEEE I honestly could not ask for more. u r da best and iluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu. ♥♥♥♥♥♥

[romancandles]

omg dying at the length of this comment. i am glad you liked it lol I HAVE REPAID MY DEBT OK. but no for real can we please discuss how lou is definitely a needy bottom and how absurdly hot that is? ughhhhhhh i really need to stop writing porn about these two but i just imagine augie being totally amazed by and completely into how much lou likes being fucked.

god i really need to go friends-only.

ANYWAY i am glad you liked it and felt that there was an appropriate amount of ~other stuff~ that wasn't just porn. ilu have a gr8 day at work!