crossover of Numb3rs and Cal's Immortals. Dedicated to & written at the request of: Mustangcandi. crossposted to my lj and to SaveColbyAuthor: Keenir
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Admittedly, I had to read this three times to catch all the nuances and interactions because there are so many characters here (which in itself is VERY impressive with how you've written this.) I love that Val and Ian are vying for top sniper. I'm sensing Val/Ian eventually. LOL.
Love the Callie/Colby interactions here and that he was going through withdraw.
Loved that Poe that Liz was Wolfe because of the similarities.
Loved that Colby knew Kim by a different name than David.
>Admittedly, I had to read this three times sorry.
> to catch all the nuances and interactions because there are so many characters here (which in itself is VERY impressive with how you've written this.) thank you.
> I love that Val and Ian are vying for top sniper.
> I'm sensing Val/Ian eventually. LOL. if ever there was something that would move Don and-or Charlie to kill Edgerton, that'd be it.
Ian/Janet maybe...they can snark each other to death.
"But you're -" Nikki started to say. "Yeah yeah, I know, I look just like your boyfriend's ex," Janet replied.
>Love the Callie/Colby interactions here and that he was going through withdraw. I was originally going to just have Callie say Hi and leave when the other Immortals arrived, but she won't leave.
>Loved that Poe that Liz was Wolfe because of the similarities. am tempted to have them meet...though I think I'll let you write that. *eg*
>Loved that Colby knew Kim by a different name than David.well she can't be Kim Hall everywhere - that
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Okay, less confused by the second chapter than I was by the first one. Rereading helped, as did chapter two. I am enjoying figuring it out, though. It's very interesting. :)
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Admittedly, I had to read this three times to catch all the nuances and interactions because there are so many characters here (which in itself is VERY impressive with how you've written this.) I love that Val and Ian are vying for top sniper. I'm sensing Val/Ian eventually. LOL.
Love the Callie/Colby interactions here and that he was going through withdraw.
Loved that Poe that Liz was Wolfe because of the similarities.
Loved that Colby knew Kim by a different name than David.
Just... love this. Looking forward to more. :)
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:D
>Admittedly, I had to read this three times
sorry.
> to catch all the nuances and interactions because there are so many characters here (which in itself is VERY impressive with how you've written this.)
thank you.
> I love that Val and Ian are vying for top sniper.
> I'm sensing Val/Ian eventually. LOL.
if ever there was something that would move Don and-or Charlie to kill Edgerton, that'd be it.
Ian/Janet maybe...they can snark each other to death.
"But you're -" Nikki started to say.
"Yeah yeah, I know, I look just like your boyfriend's ex," Janet replied.
>Love the Callie/Colby interactions here and that he was going through withdraw.
I was originally going to just have Callie say Hi and leave when the other Immortals arrived, but she won't leave.
>Loved that Poe that Liz was Wolfe because of the similarities.
am tempted to have them meet...though I think I'll let you write that. *eg*
>Loved that Colby knew Kim by a different name than David.well she can't be Kim Hall everywhere - that ( ... )
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I was originally going to just have Callie say Hi and leave when the other Immortals arrived, but she won't leave.
I don't blame her. ;p
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and thank you for the kind reply. much appreciated.
ps: am loving your icon.
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Glad you like the icon.
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