crossover of Numb3rs and Cal's Immortals. Dedicated to & written at the request of: Mustangcandi. crossposted to my lj and to SaveColbyAuthor: Keenir
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>Admittedly, I had to read this three times sorry.
> to catch all the nuances and interactions because there are so many characters here (which in itself is VERY impressive with how you've written this.) thank you.
> I love that Val and Ian are vying for top sniper.
> I'm sensing Val/Ian eventually. LOL. if ever there was something that would move Don and-or Charlie to kill Edgerton, that'd be it.
Ian/Janet maybe...they can snark each other to death.
"But you're -" Nikki started to say. "Yeah yeah, I know, I look just like your boyfriend's ex," Janet replied.
>Love the Callie/Colby interactions here and that he was going through withdraw. I was originally going to just have Callie say Hi and leave when the other Immortals arrived, but she won't leave.
>Loved that Poe that Liz was Wolfe because of the similarities. am tempted to have them meet...though I think I'll let you write that. *eg*
>Loved that Colby knew Kim by a different name than David. well she can't be Kim Hall everywhere - that would defeat the purpose of going undercover.
>Just... love this. Looking forward to more. :) more very very soon.
:D
>Admittedly, I had to read this three times
sorry.
> to catch all the nuances and interactions because there are so many characters here (which in itself is VERY impressive with how you've written this.)
thank you.
> I love that Val and Ian are vying for top sniper.
> I'm sensing Val/Ian eventually. LOL.
if ever there was something that would move Don and-or Charlie to kill Edgerton, that'd be it.
Ian/Janet maybe...they can snark each other to death.
"But you're -" Nikki started to say.
"Yeah yeah, I know, I look just like your boyfriend's ex," Janet replied.
>Love the Callie/Colby interactions here and that he was going through withdraw.
I was originally going to just have Callie say Hi and leave when the other Immortals arrived, but she won't leave.
>Loved that Poe that Liz was Wolfe because of the similarities.
am tempted to have them meet...though I think I'll let you write that. *eg*
>Loved that Colby knew Kim by a different name than David.
well she can't be Kim Hall everywhere - that would defeat the purpose of going undercover.
>Just... love this. Looking forward to more. :)
more very very soon.
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I was originally going to just have Callie say Hi and leave when the other Immortals arrived, but she won't leave.
I don't blame her. ;p
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