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SG: Universe fic: "Not entirely reincarnation"

Nov 17, 2009 09:48

Title: Not entirely reincarnation.
Author: Rodlox.
Fandom: Stargate:Universe
series: "The Unfolding" (all stories to date in "The Unfolding" can be found in the table here).
Rating: PG13
Characters/Pairing: Nicholas Rush/Vanessa James, Greer, TJ; mention(?) of the late Mrs. Rush.
Summary: Their interactions in the episode Time, with how ( Read more... )

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violetinstincts November 17 2009, 16:09:43 UTC

Not again indeed.

I liked that Rush was thinking that Greer might have said that on the planet. LOL! I love the way you have his mind work.

Ohhhh and she so needs to correct him. :)

thank you for your compliments rodlox November 17 2009, 16:43:39 UTC

*nods* between the earlier timeline's Lt James, and the late Mrs Rush... poor guy.

well it is a Greer-ism practically. :)
thank you.

>and she so needs to correct him.
agreed. would you like to write it? please?

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 17 2009, 19:16:51 UTC

I don't know if I could write it from your writings and have it match up. I like what you are doing with it. I wish you would continue. When I think of writing James, I keep getting her with Ba'al. One monute I think of her as using her sexyness like she did with Eli to get him to follow her...then the next I think of her as someone who has been treated like her body and not who she is. My brain goes "Is she a military strong woman or a sex kitten like she was with Scott?" So, it makes it more enjoyable to see how others write her.

Re: thank you for your compliments rodlox November 17 2009, 21:18:09 UTC

it doesn't have to match up - start from the assumption of them together, and write how you want to write it.

Vanessabal? not exactly kosher, hebrewwise. ;)

Baal seems to not be against the idea of visually-appealing people - but remember that Baal is the serpent = the mind within the mind. so imho he'd probably appreciate the heck out of both aspects of Lt James.

(that and, pantheonwise, its entirely possible to be a military woman and a sex kitten - look at Kali or Sekhmet)

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 18 2009, 03:24:10 UTC

I have been toying with a fic idea for a couple of weeks now. I thought this one up before I wrote anything SGU. I actually watched the first 4 shows going who would be with Ba'al? Who? Which one? Wray...no. TJ...no. Chloe...OMG NO! It has to be someone who is not directly involved right now or who is on the fence ( ... )

Re: thank you for your compliments rodlox November 18 2009, 03:32:57 UTC

:D

wow. go for it!

some say Sekhmet was the same individual as Bastet (dual personality?), others say they were two separate but associated goddesses.

have fun!

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 18 2009, 05:14:51 UTC

*shakes head looking back up at my list of basics*

The basics are a page long for goodness sake. This might be a long fic. I wonder if I should just pic certain scenes and write or just go for it?

Would you read it if it is a long fic? I think I would enjoy writing it with a cup of hot chocolate. I may not be able to follow cannon, but I think I can do it.

OOOhhhhh Would you beta as I go if you have time or if when you read it point out any grammar problems that slap you in the face? I am dyslexic, and sometimes I don't catch bad mistakes even if I go over it 3 times.

Re: thank you for your compliments rodlox November 18 2009, 05:25:19 UTC

I'd beta it - and read it.

you can pic scenes if you want.

a thought: draw a line (-------------------) between each line of text when you start, and then focus on one line of text....and write the scene, flesh it out however much it needs.

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 18 2009, 12:49:18 UTC

Ok, I am going to see if I can get the first part done today. :)

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 19 2009, 04:56:39 UTC

I will try to send the message to you as a private message. Let me know when you see it in your inbox here. Thanks!

Let me know what you truly think! :)

Re: thank you for your compliments rodlox November 19 2009, 19:16:40 UTC

I see it; copied it to WordPad; when do you need it back by?

and what do you want done? grammar check? that all the voices sound right? spelling?

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 19 2009, 22:18:44 UTC

Any major blundars that would cause someone reading to go "Wait, what is this?"

I read on the other post there a few things you found? Were you going to message back with the sentences you thought needed fixing?

Thanks!

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 19 2009, 23:02:22 UTC

I started making some changes again. I know... :)

I went ahead and put it on my journal, so you can see the updates.

You can leave comments for changes whenever you get a chance. I am just glad someone will help if I made some type of eye bleeding blunder. :)

*Jack O'Neil tips his head in from the crossover section* "She does that you know."

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 18 2009, 05:15:56 UTC

Is it cannon that James had a Tokra?

Re: thank you for your compliments rodlox November 18 2009, 05:23:03 UTC

no.

(tok'ra or goa'uld - something tried (and failed) to take her as a host - and, like o'neill, she doesn't distinguish the from the other)....and that's purely my fanon for two simple reasons:
* I wanted to tie it into the larger stargate universe
* I don't know of any muscular disorders/diseases which manifest like that

sorry for any confusion.

Re: thank you for your compliments violetinstincts November 18 2009, 12:47:33 UTC

Oh, no confusion, I was just wondering if I missed something or if something shows up in the next ep. :)

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