drabble: The Winner

Mar 18, 2009 18:56

Title: The Winner
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Much/Robin, Eve
Genre: angst, slash
Words: 100
Summary: Who really wins in this thing called love?

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The Winner

“I loved you, Much.” Eve stood in the doorway, her dirty-blond hair swept back by summer’s soft breeze.

Robin had his back to them. He couldn’t bear to see the look on ( Read more... )

fic, fic: much/robin

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robinfanatic March 20 2009, 04:03:29 UTC
I'm so glad you like it! I keep reading it and think there's too much "of him... for him...for him..." in there and it doesn't quite work the way I wanted.

Maybe there will be more Much/Robin in my future since I'm wrapping up the Much/Carter stories AND series 3 is about to begin!!!

*hfr*

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darkentwisted March 19 2009, 05:52:03 UTC
No that wasn't angsty and sad at all.

*sniff*

And poor Eve.
“I loved you, Much.” Eve stood in the doorway, her dirty-blond hair swept back by summer’s soft breeze.

It was wonderful and well written but that goes beyond saying, Char.

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robinfanatic March 20 2009, 04:06:07 UTC
see my thoughts above to old_blueeyes... I do like the angst and irony - there's some double-meaning in these 100 words. as always, I really appreciate your comments!

oh oh -- love that icon!!!
*hugs*

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darkentwisted March 20 2009, 04:51:50 UTC
Thaks for the icon love. the caption is from the song they were singing.

(Well Eve was singing, Much was murdering.)

On page 19 of TA. (The monster is growing legs!)
have to tie up one loose end that's bugging me, then on to Google docs and off to Zooey.

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robinfanatic March 20 2009, 17:00:00 UTC
the caption is from the song they were singing.

Thanks for pointing that out - I just watched that episode last week! I'm surprised I didn't put 2 + 2 together! duh!!

I've noticed that your recent TA chapters are getting longer! But that's okay! They are action-packed and jammed full of good stuff!!

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darkentwisted March 20 2009, 17:20:05 UTC
Yup, I probably should have been making each chapter 12 pages or longer in the first place. I'd be finished by now. :P Oh well, next novel.

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