...and some good news
P.S. The result of my big ol' chapter:
"Dear River,
The rewrite is very good! well-organized, clear, good to read! I've noted
only a few minor changes or corrections. These can wait until you go over
the whole, at the end.
KEEP IT UP! KEEP IT COMING! You're on track now!"
(DAMN STRAIGHT!)
"Dear River,
The rewrite is very good! well-organized, clear, good to read! I've noted
only a few minor changes or corrections. These can wait until you go over
the whole, at the end.
KEEP IT UP! KEEP IT COMING! You're on track now!"
(DAMN STRAIGHT!)