Old Fanfiction Book Club: Rachel's Pokémon Journey, Part Eight

[rionaleonhart]

You may or may not remember Old Fanfiction Book Club! Back in early 2019, I started rereading and annotating Rachel's Pokémon Journey, the first fic I ever posted, written between the ages of twelve and fourteen. It was never completed, but it got up to twenty-one chapters. However, I only annotated up to chapter fifteen.

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[zarla]

SHIFTING VIEWPOINTS aaaah how nostalgic, haha

[rionaleonhart]

Surely the only way to demonstrate whose perspective we're in is to write (JB's view) in brackets! That's how all the published novels do it, after all.

[zarla]

I actually can't remember if I ever did the ~Radic's POV~ thing in one of the fics, haha. I think I DID jump around a lot for the viewpoint character for a few of them, mostly his Pokemon, haha.