Comments | reposte: FIC: Push/Pull, Yagyuu/Niou, NC17 (14/14)

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FIC: Push/Pull, Yagyuu/Niou, NC17 (14/14)

Dec 05, 2008 15:53

Title: Push/Pull (14/14)
Author: Ociwen
Rating: NC17
Warning: Everything you can possibly think of, and then some. Spoilers for 40.5 and the entire series.
Disclaimer: Konomi owns all, except for Marui's crocs.
Summary: Niou is a girl, and everything pushed to the edge.
Author's Notes: This is one-shot fic related to Dénoument, We'll Always Have ( Read more... )

d1, tenipuri

Comments 40

doingfirst December 5 2008, 23:48:30 UTC

... D:

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am much much too emotional to write you a proper nice review, but just letting you know I read it and will be back ♥

DDDDDDDDDDDD:

SUN WILL SHINE AWAAAAAY~! reposte December 22 2008, 03:53:44 UTC

*pat pat*

platinumpair December 6 2008, 01:07:05 UTC

That was one of the best fics that I have ever read from. Perfect for Niou's birthday.

There were so many references to NiouxYagyuu. Those are some of the best parts of the entire fic.

Yagyuu sucks in a breath. He blinks. Hiromi's crooked smile is Niou's, too, but his glasses aren't. Neither is his mole, which is too high on his cheek. His hair is dusted with the snow puffs. "Dad," he says ( ... )

reposoir December 22 2008, 14:35:29 UTC

Thank you so very, very much for the kind words! I hope you didn't cry too much--it wasn't meant to be that sad, so much as a depiction of what their life was like contrary to the image portrayed in the other parts of the verse.

*offers kleenex*

(Hiromi keeps his dick in his pants, good kid ;)

platinumpair December 22 2008, 21:11:35 UTC

I cried a lot in the end. Especially when Yagyuu started to do that other girl.

Hiromi probably understood when Niou yelled at him.

wednesdayschild December 6 2008, 01:25:00 UTC

I'm crying so hard, you have no idea. Seriously, I can't see the screen properly because my eyes are so blurred :( :( :( :( :( :(

It was brilliant. I don't know what else to say because I feel numb. So many thoughts, especially about how this makes me reassess and reinterpret (and want to revisit) all the other fics in this universe.

Hiromi is right: they will get back together.

Happy birthday <3

reposoir December 22 2008, 14:40:48 UTC

*offers kleenex and consolation*

Thank you, as always, so very, very much. You know that, eventually, things will work out. Hiromi is totally right. And deep down, I'm a closet romantic who likes happy endings.

&hearts

venivincere December 6 2008, 02:30:52 UTC

EEEEE! I just got it all printed and I'm taking it to bed RIGHT NOW! *reads with glee*

reposoir December 22 2008, 14:36:19 UTC

Hope it didn't eat up too much ink...

venivincere December 22 2008, 17:28:05 UTC

No -- I just finished it a few days ago (I haven't had much time to read, lately) and I have a comment for you soon. It'll be long. Reall, Allison? You keep getting better and better all the time. I feel everything that happens to them, the way you write them. I almost got sick on the blood. But I'll tell you more later - Josh has one more doctor's appointment today, and then I'll have a bit of time. :-)

someone_alone December 6 2008, 07:34:24 UTC

I'm really not sure how to respond to this fic. I had trouble reading all of the fics in this series, and the D1 side of things was always the one that... worried me most, I guess. I have a lot of trouble imagining them as parents, and your version of it really speaks to my horror.

I spent a lot of time swaying between sympathizing with Yagyuu and hating him. The same with Niou, to a lesser degree. I really wish I could throw condoms at them though.

There was a point where I thought things were about to resolve, but then they rapidly unravelled once again, which I'd like to tell you was Very Unfair (but I still couldn't stop reading). I would have loved one last chapter of actual resolve and happiness, but I have no idea what that would look like, and this of course works better. I think I'm just stressed and overinvested. Which is making this comment a bit of a mess, um.

Jackal was fantastic. He should probably be a girl all the time.

Thanks for posting.

reposoir December 22 2008, 14:43:59 UTC

Aw, don't worry too much! As much as D1 as parents is rather horrifying, they do try. And they do love their kids, in their own special ways. And while things seem to have gone horribly wrong, somehow, there's hope, too.

Yagyuu...and his condom issues...oh how much easier it would have been to wrap the willy...secretly, though, he does like kids. And he does like pregnant!Niou. He wasn't as guilty as he should have been, by far.

Jackal is so much fun to write. I am glad that you enjoyed him, even if the rest was a bit horrific.

Thanks!