[fic] in the spirit of the spring

[remplissant]

TITLE in the spirit of the spring
FANDOM block b
PAIRING jaehyo/kyung
SUMMARY it is easy, falling in love.
WORDS 3360
RATING pg

Comments

[youniqorn]

ok so

A bead of sweat rolls down from Jiho’s chin and into the corner of his eye; Kyung scrunches his eyes shut in hopes of blinking it away. “Fuck, you’re raining on me.”
idk about these silly boys but I'M NOT CRYING IT'S JUST RAINING ON MY FACE but really this whole thing made me wibble and tear up and cry a little i'm so in love :'(

Kyung thinks it’s cute that even with his long arms Jaehyo’s fingertips hardly reach his toes
i think it's cute too :'(

Kyung’s never actually heard him speak till now, but the sound is unexpected and warm. Jaehyo laughs at himself, and such a self-deprecating sound does not suit his idea of Jaehyo
jaehyo is warm and wonderful and self-depreciating :'( he's a dumb baby that i love and want to love forever :c but sobs at kyung's idea of jaehyo and thinking he's standoffish when he's just a big gangly marshmallow :C

if you're wondering why i'm going all ":c" they aren't frowns ok they're faces of intense jaekyung and dana feels :c

His fingers itch to reach up and help him calm his wayward locks, but

[youniqorn]

They sit in that spot and watch the sunset, the skyline illuminated in its faint glow, and Kyung finally says, after a long moment of quiet companionship, “I like you, Jaehyo-hyung.”
oh.

It’s later, when Kyung is picking his bike off the ground and Jaehyo is hovering awkwardly at his side, that Jaehyo kisses him, soft and slow, just a touch of lips and nothing more. Kyung’s left reeling, lips tingling, long after Jaehyo draws away.
perfect perfect perfect perfect PERFECTION at it's finest dana i love you and you've written them all lovely and slightly awk but so endearing and wonderful and i want to cry ;__;

Jaehyo kisses him again.big fat tears rolling down my face ;_______________

[remplissant]

in everything i (you? we?) write, kyung always confesses first it seems, lol. why is that? ♥ i don't do well with writing confessions, sobs, but i'm really happy you liked the way this turned out? ;; i think i like it too but mostly i like it because i wrote it for you! :'>

kisses your face :* :* :*

i wanted to surprise you ;n; but it's not much of a surprise since you knew i was going to give you something and you did suggest this fic anyway ;__________; lol. but i just always want to give you things and let's always be friends ok! c: i love you too and you're welcome for the fic! it's the least i could do ;u; 3k isn't really enough though in the end is it? sobs, it should've been at least like 5k instead! haha. :'))))))))) ♥♥♥ you're my favorite forever and i'll make sure to never let you go. you're mine; i'm keeping you c':

i love you you you you you ♥

[youniqorn]

OBVIOUSLY JAEHYO MUST CONFESS NEXT 8(((( JAEHYO WAYLT. this turned out really sweet and cute ok ;_; super sweet and cute :C and lovely and i love it and you wrote it for me i am so lucky :'( /holds your hand

:'* ;____;

IT WAS SURPRISING? idk. you told me you'd give me things later or something and i just ;____; sobs and wibbles and it was nothing like i expected (idk what i thought you'd write or how, didn't really think about it ;;) but it's beautiful ;___; i love it so much, thank you ;n; 3K IS FINE AND BEAUTIFUL? 5K would be lovely too! idk, any number of words and lines of jaehyo are perfect, no matter what ;3;

DON'T YOU EVER LEAVE CUZ I NEVER WILL ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[remplissant]

maybe next time, jaehyo will confess first? ;______; sobs. well thank you; i'm happy you think so. i did write it for you~ who else would spend hours tweeting me about jaekyung's silly shoujo manga love, hm? :3 squeezes your fingers.

♥

i just wanted to give it to you on time ;w; i'm happy to have written this for you! i really wanted it to be more like our tweets? but that didn't happen this time around ;a; so maybe next time? y/y? :D maybe that'll be my next yearlong venture for you? lol. ;; we'll see!!! ia; no matter the word count, it always seems to be perfect and lovely ♥♥♥

cries at you and this, omg. wibbles ;~~~~~~~~~~;

[youniqorn]

squishes you ;___; jaehyo pls learn to confess you doofus u___u thank you for writing this for me bb ;v; it's perfect and lovely and i love it so much ;_______; let us please keep talking and tweeting forever and for always :')

♥

thank you so much for giving it to me on time too, though it wouldn't have really mattered if you gave it to me late, it really set my mood for my birthday ;;;;; ♥ ig it's not really /that much/ like our tweets because our tweets have one million and three emoticons and more gushing and are very action based sobs, but this was subtle and sweet and lovely ;;;; perfect bl/shoujo manga! ♥ and omg ;;;;; if this becomes something huge and long in the long run, then ;;;; LET IT BE ♥ ♥ ♥

;3; ♥

[remplissant]

of course. i promised to do my best to continue with our friendship like this! holds your hand. i want us to only become closer in the future and share more silly tweets/emails/chats/etc etc etc. ♥

i'm glad you enjoyed this and it didn't ruin your birthday /o\ I ALMOST DIDN'T SHOW IT TO YOU i was just going to let you find it on your own sobs. but yeah ;; agreed. not really anything much like our tweets. ;; which, i hope to go back to those and actually write something based around them. ;; this was just a sample taste!!! CRIES i d k how huge and/or long it would end up being, but i'd try to give you something you enjoyed /o\

♥

[remplissant]

cries at your comments. um. ok! response time :333

[youniqorn]

beautiful bratty kyung is lovely and zikyung are such qt lazy friends n___n I KNOW YOU'LL FLY HIGH IN YOUR LIFE sobs too bad there were tears ok and i was :'c and :c and ;____; and Q_____Q

jaehyo's ~cold~ busan man or whatever charm (l o l) pretty much lasted as long as it took me to take freeze off loop and realise that jaehyo is a silly silly ridiculous beautiful boy u____u

cries, outtake, kyung says "jaehyo-hyung is clumsy" and jaehyo thanks him and takes it as a compliment.
omg jaehyo you utter loser sobs LOSERHYUNG PLS

in my head i can see them sitting by the han river, crossed-legged across from each other, munching on store-bought sandwiches and peeling oranges :'( qt babies sharing food. and eeeeeeee sobs more bus moments ;___;

you write lots of cute things ok psshhht ;__; this was sweet even with the minimal dialogue, read easily and was just so cute u___u ♥ fluff was NOT GROSS OMG more like perfect and lovely ♥♥♥

CRIES ALL OVER YOUR HANDS

[remplissant]

kyung is forever a bratty child ;n; i swear he's a six year old at heart!!! sobs. (something in korean) YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE~! it's currently raining, so maybe it was just raining a bit on your face, hm? :'( hugs you tight. i don't ever want to make you cryyyyyy :'freeze is still my jam, ok :( i always go back to it and look at them and sob a bit. but yes yes yes to all things about jaehyo!!! he really is just some ridiculous and clumsy prince charming :( he's adorable, really, in the end

[youniqorn]

i don't ever want to make you cryyyyyy
IT'S TOO LATE I HAVE CRIED MY TEARS OF BEAUTIFUL JOY AND FEELS

jaehyo was like. really fucking hot in freeze ok idk whether it was the hair or just the way he was styled but like HOT DAMN MAN and then tell them happened and match up and bfualjikjalsikjaflaks clumsy charming prince hyo for the win u___u

I WANT IT TOO n____n they can always be awk with each other but it fits ok THEY FIT EACH OTHER SO WELL + more bus moments and all kinds of moments ok :c cycling together or something and visiting and and and ;__;

your dialogue was perfect u_u do not worry! it added to the mood! and i as i read this again and again, the narrative became more like kyung's thoughts (his thoughts about jaehyo's personality, not confessing at opportune times, etc), it was easy for me to read it like a manga? in faded thought squares/bubbles and just. i love how it translated that way to me :')

i am not complimentary enough! ;;;

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ NIAGARA WAtearFALL!!!!!
(^ i'm not very witty but ;;;; please laugh huhu)

[remplissant]

MY NEW YEAR'S RESOLUTION WILL BE TO TRY NOT TO UPSET YOU AND/OR MAKE YOU CRY :c

[youniqorn]

YOU DON'T SO IT'S ALL GOOD

freeze era, ohhhh. my good looking namja~ sobs not that he's not good looking now but back then he had his whole intense look going on (pretty sure it had to do with his hair and eyebrows) and now he's just 113% dork n__n

wow crying so much at the bike image hflkajlksjk jaehyo has an old bike that probably belonged to his mom or something with a basket on the front where they stuff their bags. kyung can hold on and cling. there should also be a scene where jaehyo walks home but kyung bikes one day and gives jaehyo a lift. too cute ;A;

i loved the addition of all the suffixes! ;;;; "hyung" is a cute term of endearment to me, idk ;__; you didn't butcher ANYTHING sobs you made everything lovely and wonderful! AND WHY WOULD YOU APOLOGIZE FOR ZIKYUNG HUH brotp 4ever!!!1!

my brain is all bl manga i think it comes with years of training lmao idk HOHOHO

sobs i am not funny cries ;A;

[remplissant]

or they can stick tiny little lunchboxes into the basket and drive to the river's edge and eat there together. cute little dates ♥ ;~~~; kyung would cling so tight and bury his face in jaehyo's back when jaehyo pedals them down a steep hill; he'd deny clinging later with a flushed face, but jaehyo'd know better. c: kyung pedaling himself and jaehyo around would be super cute though omg.

i think there should be more bl manga -esque jaekyung fic. /pokes. what do you think?