★ Heroes: Bad Day (The Slightly More Incestuous Remix)

Apr 10, 2008 07:29

★ [ Niki/Claire, Niki/Claire/Peter, Jessica | R | 100 words ]
When has anything in her life ever been right?

Spoilers: takes place in Five Years Gone.
Warnings: implied incest.
Original story: Bad Day by amathela, 364 words.
Remix author: sinandmisery

Bad Day (The Slightly More Incestuous Remix) )

-round 4-, original author: amathela, remix author: sinandmisery, fandom: heroes

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trascendenza April 14 2008, 00:17:45 UTC
Awwww, Niki. I like the sort of back and forth sense that, yes, she can see this wrong, but at the same time she's comfortable where she is and not going to move. Nicely done!

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sinandmisery April 23 2008, 02:22:12 UTC
Thanks. I love writing Niki/Jessica ;)

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sophinisba April 14 2008, 04:17:36 UTC
Aw, that is great. I especially like that glimpse of Jessica, how she's never really without that side of her.

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sinandmisery April 23 2008, 02:22:42 UTC
Thank you :)

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amathela April 14 2008, 16:29:20 UTC
This is awesome; I love the sense of wrongness, and of acceptance, and the way you've managed to paint such an evocative scene in so few words :)

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sinandmisery April 23 2008, 02:23:08 UTC
Thank you! Your original was pretty awesome as well!

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