Never Never Land by Redvelvetribbon (FR 21 Gibbs/Tony/Tim)

Jan 19, 2010 07:35

Chapter 18

Tim curled up in the corner so he was wedged between the side of the house and the balcony railings and wept. It felt safer somehow as if the walls would stop him from falling apart.

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angst, slash, gibbs/tony/tim, hurt/comfort, threesome, lost boys series, never never land

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ladyeternal January 19 2010, 02:21:48 UTC
Holy Mother of God. I don't know where to start with the amazingness of this fic.

I suppose I have to start with Tim just relaxing into Gibbs' embrace, just letting Gibbs be his safety net. That nearly brought me to tears.

And then I damn near snurgled my VitaminWater through my nose when it came to Tony's wet dream. That was hilarious! Especially how he tried to play it off as a het wet dream before he realized he was talking in his sleep!

And then Tim's rage, slowly finding its opening... I've had my own fantasies like that, except it was my lover that had been attacked, not me. This. Exactly.

I huggle the Tony for his helplessness at the end. It's a feeling I know well. But Tony won't run; not this time. He's not capable of abandoning Tim and Gibbs. He might try, but he'll let them convince him to stay.

I have said before and I say again that your story has such elements of real trauma and recovery that I am in awe. You have done it again here. I love every word!

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redvelvetribbon January 19 2010, 04:42:14 UTC
Thank you. Bows. Yes its may not seem like it but its a step forward and rage has to be delt with as much as terror and fear does.
Glad Im still keeping you interested. Im trying to balance some moments of humor with what is a very heavy topic so it doesn't become relentless and monotonous.
Off to start next chapter....each one takes me a while as they end up very long each time.

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ladyeternal January 19 2010, 05:25:33 UTC
Know all about the rage! (See above.)

I've seen relentless whumpage before; this is nowhere close. You are achieving your goals for this story by a wide margin, Velvet. I really do love this fic and, like kaylashay, I've friended you so I know when you update!

Each chapter is better than the last and it is worth the wait every time.

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redvelvetribbon January 19 2010, 05:30:00 UTC
* Blushes under heavy praise.

Thank you

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ladyeternal January 19 2010, 12:41:24 UTC
We are all feedback junkies, m'dear. You're most welcome.

Thank you for this amazing fic.

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