Desheret (Merry Christmas MrsQuizzical! )

[redsiodaslair]

Some of the fics that I have written are ready to be posted, so I decided to post two, maybe three of them before Christmas.

Title: Desheret
Rating: R
Characters: The ghost of an Egyptian witch, Bill, Charlie
Warnings: Erotic themes
Summary: The time has come. It has been a hundred or three hundred years I have waited for a son to take. This chamber

Comments

[rose_starr]

I still can't believe how incredible this is!! The fact that you even thought of something this cool and imaginative just rocks my socks!!!

And it's so hot to hear these thoughts of Bill and Charlie ... who are soooooo incredibly hot and so just absolutely perfect!!!

Seriously, this is so original and so amazing that I will never tire of reading it!!

[redsiodaslair]

Thank you for your beta work on this story...It has been such a fun piece to write and to imagine. I'm glad that Bill and Charlie's appeal can come through her eyes. :)

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!

[shiiki]

*fans self

[redsiodaslair]

Oh dear - you are so kind! Creating an OC is always a risk, but I wanted to tell Bill's feat from an original point of view, one that could show his character from an outer point of view. Her voice was also a challenge, and your comment makes me think that I did something right in that.

The idea of Bill in Egypt, trying to find treasures and attempting to outwit magic that had thousands of years was definitely too appealing for me to pass. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!

[mrsquizzical]

i don't have time to sit and give this the attention i can just tell it's going to deserve.

wow.

so huge christmas hugs and i'll be right on it, as soon as i can!

you're amazing.

[mrsquizzical]

oh wow.

wow.

WOW.

that was an amazing piece.

i adored her turn of phrase. her 'otherness'. and the characterisations of bill and charlie were so clear.

really. thankyou. fantastic stuff.

[redsiodaslair]

I'm relieved that you liked it! I had a great time writing it for you. :-)

Merry Christmas to you!

[yaaronet]

Pointed here by mrsquizzical -- this was really great to read, totally different than most fanfic, which is always a fun change.

thank you :)

[redsiodaslair]

Thank you very much for reading. :) Unusual point of views are fun to explore!

[kath_ballantyne]

Wow, this is amazing.
I love your characterisation of Bill.
As for your Egypt and Anat, *dies*
I could feel the heat and the sand and age of this. I could smell the oils and unguents.

I want to run my fingers over the statue, I wonder how she'd react to a woman.

I love the feel of Egyptian history. I studied new kingdom in school and I loved the Anne Rice take on things too, this has something of the feel of both.

This had such depth. It has kept me up until 3am when I have to get up early tomorrow to drive to Sydney.

Q is so lucky.

[redsiodaslair]

Thank you very much for reading and for your kind words!

I'm glad you enjoyed the feel of it. researched quite a bit about symbols and imagery, and I'm happy that you felt it created a plausible universe.

Again, thank you so much for reviewing, it means a great deal to me. :)