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I Believe in Peace, Bitch (fic)

Jun 25, 2009 11:48

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: I believe in peace, bitch.

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG-13 for language.

Word Count: 644

Characters/Pairings: Eden, Elle (mentions of HRG & The Haitian.)

Disclaimer: Don’t own. Kring = Fail.

Spoilers/Time Line: None really

Summery: Scheming Elle

Author’s Notes: For superkappa who requested Eden, Elle to the tune of The Waitress, by Tori ( Read more... )

gift!fic, fic, elle bishop, eden, heroes, tori amos

Comments 14

albion1919 June 25 2009, 17:19:04 UTC

"Something short and ugly."

PISH! SHE ROCKED THE PIXIE LOOK! Her plan backfired, Eden was the best and original Company Girl thankyouverymuch.

That was great, Elle's funny but Eden FTW!

razycrandomgirl June 25 2009, 19:59:40 UTC

:D YES! You know I love me some Eden McCain.

Maybe I'll do something to follow up with this, but from Eden's POV. Cause she rawx!

albion1919 June 25 2009, 20:30:53 UTC

YAY do! I don't know whether to believe that GN where Eden kicks Elle, or if she was making it up. Elle was stealing her clothes in my AU, or at least coping her style and storyline ;) XD.

Poor Eden. She’s recovering addict, basically kidnapped and blackmailed into working there and then her hair is chopped off :O

razycrandomgirl June 26 2009, 02:32:41 UTC

Well, she rocked it so Elle's plan did back fire. :D

Yeah, Elle doesn't know how to act around people. She was interested in but then Noah was spending too much time with her (or so she thought). Then jealousy. I think when new people come to the company Elle's ears always perk up. Maybe the thinks this one will be my friend.

mm

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bellonablack June 25 2009, 20:14:02 UTC

LOL Elle!!!

Heh she's so sly and clever. I think this is so good, and I love you for it. So Elle with her scheming and of course--she'd want the Haitian to notice but he doesn't. :/

I'm really interested because of course, she'd be jealous of Eden. Just something about Eden's usefulness...

Hmm nice, nice. I liked it lots.

superkappa June 25 2009, 21:46:21 UTC

Man, now I need to really get on that Elle and Maya fic.

But, that aside, I really enjoyed this. You captured Elle's voice really well. I could definitely see her being jealous of Eden. And she would try to get back at her by doing things like trying to get the girl's hair cut. It's petty to be certain, but Elle can be very petty at times, and you showed that very well. I really enjoyed reading this. If you did do a followup through Eden's point of view, I'd be all for reading that too.

razycrandomgirl June 26 2009, 06:42:36 UTC

take your time. ;D

I think Elle's a little envious of anyone who's not her. She likes herself enough but ... ya know. If we all had Daddies like Noah...

Elle is such a kid. I liked her enough when she was in vol.2. I liked how pouty/bratty she was ... She was fun. And when HRG was talking about her dad and the things he allowed to happen to her.

superkappa June 26 2009, 06:52:05 UTC

Exactly, I loved how pouty and bratty she was. I loved how she could be really dangerous one moment, and then a child another. And once you found out more about why she was that way, it made sense. I wish they had explored the effects of her memory loss and the experiments more...I mean, I know why they killed off Bob so quickly (because the actor had a bad accident) but it would have been nice to see her break away from him while he was still alive.

razycrandomgirl June 27 2009, 03:25:44 UTC

Why did they need to kill Bob off at all(besides the accident.)? I heard that about the actor. I'm glad he's okay. I like him.

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stainofmylove June 26 2009, 12:47:13 UTC

You've made Elle such a believable and awesome mix of silly/mean and smart/vulnerable here. Totally love it--and the mere thought of such awesome heroines being in the same building together is just ... awesome. If I felt I could write Eden I'd so be all over that.

"At first I'd thought that Mr. Bennet had gone a little kinky, but I realized that he usually does things for a reason."
Hilarious! And maybe kind of sad if you think about whatever hand HRG probably had in shaping Elle's life.

razycrandomgirl June 27 2009, 07:29:06 UTC

And maybe kind of sad if you think about whatever hand HRG probably had in shaping Elle's life.

And I didn't even think about that. O_O

That's how I see Elle, the person they had in vol.3 was ... uh ... no. Invasion of the body snatcher was all over that season.

You should try Eden! She's really fun. And her power is kickass!