I Believe in Peace, Bitch (fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: I believe in peace, bitch.

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: PG-13 for language.

Word Count: 644

Characters/Pairings: Eden, Elle (mentions of HRG & The Haitian.)

Disclaimer: Don’t own. Kring = Fail.

Spoilers/Time Line: None really

Summery: Scheming Elle

Author’s Notes: For superkappa who requested Eden, Elle to the tune of The Waitress, by Tori

Comments

[superkappa]

Man, now I need to really get on that Elle and Maya fic.

But, that aside, I really enjoyed this. You captured Elle's voice really well. I could definitely see her being jealous of Eden. And she would try to get back at her by doing things like trying to get the girl's hair cut. It's petty to be certain, but Elle can be very petty at times, and you showed that very well. I really enjoyed reading this. If you did do a followup through Eden's point of view, I'd be all for reading that too.

[razycrandomgirl]

take your time. ;D

I think Elle's a little envious of anyone who's not her. She likes herself enough but ... ya know. If we all had Daddies like Noah...

Elle is such a kid. I liked her enough when she was in vol.2. I liked how pouty/bratty she was ... She was fun. And when HRG was talking about her dad and the things he allowed to happen to her.

[superkappa]

Exactly, I loved how pouty and bratty she was. I loved how she could be really dangerous one moment, and then a child another. And once you found out more about why she was that way, it made sense. I wish they had explored the effects of her memory loss and the experiments more...I mean, I know why they killed off Bob so quickly (because the actor had a bad accident) but it would have been nice to see her break away from him while he was still alive.

[razycrandomgirl]

Why did they need to kill Bob off at all(besides the accident.)? I heard that about the actor. I'm glad he's okay. I like him.

[superkappa]

I think the accident was why they killed Bob. He couldn't do much acting at the time, because it was a spinal injury. So they killed him off.