The Outside World, Part 3 (Fic)

[razycrandomgirl]

Author: Razycrandomgirl

Title: The Outside World

Fandom: Heroes

Rating: G

Characters/Pairings: Gabriel/Maya

Disclaimer: Don’t own them. Just like to play with them sometimes.

Spoilers/Time Line: AU

Summery: Time to cool off.

Author’s Notes: 'Casa de Sopa' Is her family restaurant.

Part 1 Part 2

"Are you hot, yet?"

“I’m good

Comments

[razycrandomgirl]

OMG! O_O

lmao

Dude ... that icon ... O_O >_>

Ask and ye shall receive!!

[sinemoras09]

Wooo! I loved that Maya was forcing Gabe to wear a pop pop hat, and how he wanted to bring a coat, and how he had normal sunglasses and not the crappy flip-top ones....I also liked how you described the kids playing in the water and whatnot, I really felt like I was there!!!

Great job! XD

Re: Ask and ye shall receive!!

[razycrandomgirl]

thank you! :D

*hugs*

[leoprincess]

All my brain can muster up is 'AWWWWWWWWWWWWW'.

That ok?

[razycrandomgirl]

lol si.

What else could I expect? It's Fluff. It's "awwww" inducing.

[fifmeister]

Two chapters in one day?! What wonderful thing did we do to deserve this? :D

OMG, Maya teasing Gabriel about his "grandpa" style. That's so perfect! *giggles*

He struggles for words. "You-- I?"

Awwww, I LOVE his adorable awkwardness!

UST and touchings and lightheadedness FTW!

I love Maya's enthusiasm and playfulness. She's so adorable! *squeezes her*

EEEEE Gabe carrying her! *squeals*

There's more coming, right? Can't wait for the next part!

I love UST! *sigh*

[razycrandomgirl]

I'm amazed myself today! It was all, actually, one long piece. I broke it up because the dialog stretched it out a lot.
Then I ended up adding a bit more because ... *facepalm* I'm weird I can't stop myself. *shakes head*

Gabriel, Gabriel, Gabriel! FTMFW! Poor dude can't believe that Maya wants to hang out with him. She keeps coming by and he's like O_O!

Yes, more is coming. I promise to keep it light. ;)

[define_serenity]

It's the heat
Suure Gabe, keep telling yourself that ;)

O_O THAT LAST IMAGE WAS SO HOT !! Also, it made me happy in the pants *points at icon* *runs*

Great work darling ^______^

[razycrandomgirl]

Thank you! Whose pants are those anyway? Gabe's happy in the pants. >_<

*hugs*

[dana_serenity]

LOL. They're Adam Levine's pants ;)

[razycrandomgirl]

:) that makes your pants waaaaaay happy! I thought it might be Adam. He's such a tease!