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[razorleaf]

Ok, Silawen. First I'd like to thank you for you taking the time out to do that. There are some things I wanted to mention about the story.

One, the main reason why this story lacks a bunch of things is really hard to explain. You see a lot of times I write stories, or parts of stories, that lack good writing skill due to me not putting very

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[charizamdc]

I reckon that this is often just an excuse. They can't have worked hard on it, you see, because then your criticism would reflect on their true writing ability.

[razorleaf]

Well, the fic is so bad that I almost believe him. On the other hand I can't believe that the first excuse someone comes up with is 'I'm a lazy bastard'.