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Oct 08, 2011 13:30

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 2/3 minviendha October 11 2011, 19:40:43 UTC
He turned off the burner and rolled down his sleeve too fast, hissed for the brush of cloth over damaged skin. “No,” he yelled, checking the time. “Not yet.”

“Come and entertain me, then! I’m going crazy out here!”

“Someone is,” Sam heard, and he glanced around, stomach sinking, to see Lucifer rummaging through one of the cabinets. He grinned cheekily at Sam. “Maybe next time, eh kiddo? Experimentation is all about trial and error.”

Sam gritted his teeth and pretended not to hear it, pretended not to notice the way black and red crawled around the edges of his vision, trying to get in. He was managing. He was managing fine.

**
Bobby was back, and Dean was in a bad mood. He complained about everything from his leg itching to the shows on TV (Man, Jose is such a fucking idiot! Look what he’s turning down, and for Marisa?) and the food. Sam escaped into the bedroom and took a moment to breathe.

“Hey, Sammy.”

He jerked, and didn’t turn around, didn’t look at him, like that might make him not be there. He wrapped his hand around his forearm and pressed down with his thumb on the burn, breathing through his teeth. Lucifer padded softly up behind him and made a sympathetic clicking sound with his tongue.

“Doesn’t seem to be working, does it? May you should try something more extreme.” His thumb glided down Sam’s spine. “There are all kinds of sharp edges in this house. Perfectly easy to have an accident. No one would ever know. Don’t tell me you haven’t thought about it.”

His eyes drifted over to the bags in the corner, of guns and knives and-

“Of course,” Lucifer said. “You can always go for the big finish. Blow your brains out. How bad can it be?”

Sam swallowed hard and looked sharply away. It wasn’t enough. The pain wasn’t enough. His thumb skidded over the scar tissue on his palm.

“Maybe just a little knife,” Lucifer suggested. “Small, light, easy to carry whenever you need it. I bet you could find one to stab all the way in, and know all the places where you wouldn’t hit anything vital.” The idea, Lucifer’s voice, tugged at something dark and sick inside him, and he needed to do something.

The duffel was open. He could slip one of the smaller knives out so easily. “Go on,” Lucifer urged. “You want me gone, better commit. You and pain are old friends.”

Before he could think too hard about it, Sam knelt down, reached in, and found one of the switchblades. It would fit in his pocket, if he wanted it there. Flipping it out, the edge was sharp.

“Sam? Whatcha doing?” Sam jerked and looked up to find Bobby looking at him oddly.

“Uh - just checking the weapons. Organizing some of them,” he said, stupidly. Bobby gave him a slightly sideways look. Lucifer smiled over his shoulder and thrust his fist through Bobby’s stomach. It came out the front red and holding a handful of entrails. Sam flinched, and dropped the switchblade toward his ankle, where Bobby couldn’t see, sliced a thin line in the skin. The pain was sharp and immediate, and Lucifer was gone. There was blood sliding into his sock.

“Your brother’s being a right pain in the ass. How about you take a turn for a while?”

“Sure, Bobby,” Sam said, and stood up. His jeans would cover the mark, and it would clot soon. “Don’t leave me alone with him for too long, though, okay?”

Bobby seemed appeased, and moved on toward the back door. There was rain on the roof and Sam headed back toward the couch where Dean had made his throne. Lucifer didn’t follow him, didn’t make a sound.

Sam slid the switchblade into his pocket.

**
It rained for the rest of the week, the Leviathans were still wreaking havoc on the outside world, and Dean alternated between pissy and high on drugs.

Sam took comfort in the slight weight in his right pocket, and the thin and slender lines drawn in blood on his body in places they wouldn’t be seen. Just enough to sting, to hurt, to pierce the skin.

Maybe sometimes a little deeper than that.

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 minviendha October 11 2011, 19:41:32 UTC
Because Lucifer always came back, and every time seemed to hold on a little harder. His whispered encouragements were hard to ignore, and even worse were his descriptively offered alternatives.

“You could slice yourself open in the shower and let all your guts collect in the bottom. They can tell your fortune that way.”

“Ever wondered what gun oil tastes like? You could find out. Might be interesting.”

He left eventually. Sam just had to find the right pain to make him do it. And Bobby kept coming so close to catching him at his little ritual, and Bobby would freak out and tell Dean-

Except it turned out Dean didn’t need to be told. They were sitting on the couch and watching a telenovela, Lucifer sitting in the next chair over and complaining about the accents, Sam twitchy and wondering when he could get away to fix things when Dean said, “Sam, you been hurting yourself?”

“Ooh,” said Lucifer, “The plot thickens,” and Sam’s eyes cut over toward him for just a moment. Dean noticed, though, and followed his gaze.

“That him? Stop looking, okay, Sam? And answer my question.”

Sam looked away, and rubbed his thumb over the scar tissue on his palm. It didn’t work. “No,” he said, finally. “No, I’m fine.”

“Bobby thinks you’re up to something. He doesn’t know what. I need you to tell me, though.”

Sam couldn’t lie, not the way Dean was looking at him, not glancing at Dean’s broken leg and thinking I should have stopped it, I should have. “It’s nothing serious,” he said instead. “Just - I’m in control, okay?”

And the broken leg was bad enough, but the way Dean’s face crumpled was way worse, and the way he looked simultaneously heartbroken and angry. “Sam,” he said, and stopped. Muttered, “Jesus.”

“It’s just a way of managing,” Sam said. “It used to be...my hand. But it healed.”

“It’s going to stop,” Dean said lowly, and when Sam hesitated, he almost yelled it. “It’s going to stop. Okay?”

“Dean-”

“Okay? I don’t care what you have to do. I don’t care if you have to cling to my fucking leg until you feel better. Just don’t…do that.”

Sam hunched his shoulders. “I have it under control.”

“Yeah?” Dean’s voice vibrated. “Under control like the demon blood?”

Sam flinched, jerked back like he’d been slapped, and almost reached for his switchblade, remembering when Dean wasn’t Dean but was Lucifer, but then Dean grimaced and looked away and his leg was broken, so Sam was pretty sure… “That’s not what I…it’s just the same, Sam, the same self-destructive shit, and you could kill yourself with it the same way. If you can’t…deal, then for fuck’s sake say something. Don’t just start…” He trailed off.

Sam looked into the opposite corner of the room. “He’ll throw you out, Sam,” Lucifer purred. “I always told you you could only count on me.”

“Shut up,” Sam whispered, and reached for his switchblade, just to feel it was there. Dean sat up with a grunt and grabbed his arm.

“He here?” He said. Sam nodded, after a moment.

“Talk to me,” Dean said, and when Sam paused, shook his wrist. “Talk to me. Not him. I’m here, he isn’t. And I bet I make better conversation.”

Sam closed his eyes and made his arm relax. “He says you’ll leave,” he said. Then clarified, “Leave me.”

“Fuck,” Dean groaned, and then shook his head. “I won’t, Sam. I’m not.” Sam just ducked his head and nodded. Dean sighed.

“Want to give me what’s in your pocket now?”

Sam handed over the switchblade. Dean looked at it. He grimaced. Then he threw it across the room, behind the ratty corpse of a couch. “There,” he said. “Now that’s gone.” And smiled. Sam tried to forget that Lucifer was still staring across the room, and found his own smile.

There were still marks scabbing. He could use those, for another week or two. Dig in a thumbnail or a fingertip. After that…

Sam didn’t look at Lucifer, but he could feel fingers touching the hair at the nape of his neck anyway. “Just keep feeling it, Sam,” he murmured. “Let it eat you up and spit you out. You’re mine. And wherever you go, you’ll never really be out of the Cage. It’s in you now.”

“Sam?” Dean looked worried. Maybe he’d been calling for a few seconds. Sam focused on him blankly. “You okay?” He said, and Sam wanted to laugh. Lucifer did.

“Yeah,” he said. “I’m fine.”

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 rokhal October 11 2011, 22:01:43 UTC
The claustrophobia and panic in this fic crawled under my skin and stayed there.

I love how Dean steps in, all common sense and protection, and there's no quick fix, but at least they slip out of their death spiral and into a holding pattern. Nice.

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 lunasky3 October 11 2011, 22:31:24 UTC
SAAAAAAAAAAM

Oh man this hurt in all the best ways. Lucifer was brilliant. Ugh. *shivers*

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 hidden_easel October 12 2011, 06:54:00 UTC
Thanks so much for filling this too! Fucking awesome read!

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 mentholpixie October 12 2011, 18:53:00 UTC
OMG, that was just... painful and hearbreaking and creepy and awesome.

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 quickreaver October 14 2011, 04:48:14 UTC
I've been writing something similar and wow, great minds think alike! I'll probably post tomorrow and you can see what creepy twins we are. But you got there first so awesome props to you! Our poor Sammeh...

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 thethirdbar October 15 2011, 00:22:15 UTC
perfect. thanks very much for writing this! :)

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 quickreaver October 15 2011, 05:19:22 UTC
Okay, here's my accidental knock-off of your fill! (I like yours better...) But more hurt!Sammy is more, so, enjoy. :D

As Many Times As It Took

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Re: FILL: Look'd Up In Perfect Silence At the Stars, self-harm, PG-13ish, mentions of torture, 3/3 debbiel66 October 17 2011, 01:53:00 UTC
Sam looking for just the right pain to drive the devil away is an absolutely devastating concept. So well done, thank you!

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