Fic Exchange -- Written for nemesis_cry

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Title: Perfect

Comments

[rawthorne]

I couldn't have asked for anything better.

This is perfection.

[drunken_hedghog]

I'm so glad you liked it! That was the point after all.

[drunken_hedghog]

Thanks! Glad that worked out!

[indyhat]

This is great - a really interesting take on Thompson, too! I like it.

[drunken_hedghog]

Yeah, I've never exactly thought of Thompson as the caring type, tbh. But I think it sorta works. He's still a bastard, and he's doing things in his own interests, but it's still comforting.

[mossymermaid]

Ahhhh, what an interesting dynamic you have between these two. People are never black and white, and it would be so easy to leave these two as sterotypical two-dimensional "villains2 and leave it at that.

You show Thompson as the typical macho type but caring in his own way, and Candice as having rock-bottom self-esteem ad the way she deals with it... an excellent piece. The dialogue is realistic.

Fantastic fiction 20/20

[drunken_hedghog]

Thank you! As a 'grey' person myself, I don't see people as one dimensional. I'm glad you agreed with my interpretation of the characters. It's always a relief!