Everything Ventured

Nov 05, 2009 19:27


Title: Everything Ventured
Pairing: Orlijah
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: No I don't own them, yes this is made up.
Feedback: As always, any feedback (inc. CC) is very welcome.
Notes: A proper drabble - I've never actually written one with exactly 100 words before!  For Read more... )

elijah/orlando

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lijahlover November 5 2009, 20:27:16 UTC
Well very very nice :)

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randomdarling November 6 2009, 11:32:01 UTC
Thank you! :)

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lisabellex November 5 2009, 20:28:52 UTC
Everything ventured, everything gained.

I could hear Orlando saying (or rather, thinking) that line. What a great picture you've painted in just 100 words.

I'd love to read a follow-on drabble - perhaps what happens next, from Elijah's perspective... pleasey-please?

:D

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randomdarling November 6 2009, 11:32:44 UTC
Thank you for your comment! :)

A follow-on drabble...hm, sounds fun! :D

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tweedle_ November 6 2009, 21:32:46 UTC
I think this needs a follow on too. Lovely start and I'd like to see where it takes them. :)

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randomdarling November 7 2009, 10:17:20 UTC
Well, perhaps I'll need to write a follow on then! Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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itstonedme November 14 2009, 01:12:03 UTC
Fabulous little drabble, with all kinds of dramatic visuals. Less is absolutely more. Pleeeease go on.

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randomdarling November 14 2009, 11:38:51 UTC
Thank you for such lovely feedback, glad you liked it. :)

Looks like a sequel might be in order then. :)

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wtf? I missed this toooo?? *feels so bad* illuins_lair November 15 2009, 00:48:53 UTC
Indeed! Never too many Orlijah´s!!! *cough*

Oh fuck. The details caught me already in the first sentence, at: "artfully tousled hair" *tousles own hair automatically* and *can´t believe how much i´m into subtleness these days!*..but it doesn´t make sense quoting a 100-words-drabble right??

*just generally hyperventilates*----------------> Orli summoning his courage - *flails* I´m sorry but that´s just hot in itself ok!

You _can´t do this to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH I love this piece. Marry me Random, marry!me!!!!!!!!

"Everything ventured, everything gained."
*THUDthudthudthuuuuuuud*

I fucking_love_drabbles!!!!!

I need serious help. I fall in love with words?
And yeah, I´m loving it. As in LovingIt BigTime

*tries to count F-words in this fb-post and I *do* tend to say "fuck"-related things right?*

Fuck it.
Marry me.

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Re: wtf? I missed this toooo?? *feels so bad* randomdarling November 15 2009, 11:24:39 UTC
*hugs* I do believe you've written a longer comment than the actual drabble! :)

I'm so glad you liked it! I love details in things I read, so I suppose it's only fair to deliver them back!

Marry you? Certianly - but only if we can have a huge vintage lace and mismatched teacups kind of wedding! :)

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Re: wtf? I missed this toooo?? *feels so bad* illuins_lair November 15 2009, 12:53:48 UTC
LOL "a longer comment than the actual drabble".. =P Yeah I tend to get all heart-fluttery when coming across piercing words that melt my mind....
Details are a goldmine and when displayed in the right context they..sparkle with a new light!! Something like that. *clutches heart*

I always thought Less Is More only being true in sense of words and text. When it comes to clothes and accessories and shoes - I believe in The More The Merrier =)

*smoooooch* Oh.. (insert happy sigh here) Wow.. I knew you were my kind of girl ---> Vintage Lace and Mismatched Teacups!!!!!!! That´s SOOOOOOO going to be the theme of our wedding! We can wear tiara´s too! Elvish circlets? Or you know those 1920-feathery-headpieces.. or or.. And crystal gems on the tables.. and some hotnekkidguys (draped in see-through greek toga´s) on display in the corners.. and and...

*gets totally carried away and wraps you up in lace*

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Re: wtf? I missed this toooo?? *feels so bad* randomdarling November 15 2009, 15:33:13 UTC
OOh 1920s headpiece for me please! :D Do you think Orlando and Elijah would attend if we told them we met while writing slash about them? ;) I'm sure they would! :)

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