The Gratuitous Vampire AU - Part 2
Did I say this was going to be four parts? Obviously when you all thought I said four what I actually meant was five. >.>
Title: Sign of the Cross (a.k.a. the Completely Gratuitous Guilty Gear Vampire AU)
Summary: Gears or vampires, it's all just another day's work for the Holy Order. But they never do quite manage to screen some of their more ( Read more... )
Title: Sign of the Cross (a.k.a. the Completely Gratuitous Guilty Gear Vampire AU)
Summary: Gears or vampires, it's all just another day's work for the Holy Order. But they never do quite manage to screen some of their more ( Read more... )
Ky is perfectly IC, it's so like him to blame himself for being anything less than being 100% perfect. His feelings and emotions are very well portrayed. Likewise, Sol's "actions speak louder than words" attitude is perfectly IC.
The cliffhanger is too cruel to us poor readers! I need to know what happens next! Do we get some description of Sol licking Ky's neck?
All those years of Order training that saw him promoted to captain before his twentieth year
This line made me wonder, is the timeline different than GG's? How old are Ky and Sol in this fic? How long have they known each other?
And while I'm wondering, can vampires in this fic eat other food besides blood? Since in the first chapter Sol mentioned something about eating something before his shift.
Did I say this was going to be four parts? Obviously when you all thought I said four what I actually meant was five. >.>
Five? Why not six or seven? ;P *is shamelessly greedy*
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Ky is perfectly IC, it's so like him to blame himself for being anything less than being 100% perfect. His feelings and emotions are very well portrayed. Likewise, Sol's "actions speak louder than words" attitude is perfectly IC.
I actually rewrote that section a couple of times before I was happy with it, and I still wasn't certain I hadn't overdone it a bit in the end. Glad the work paid off. ^_^
The cliffhanger is too cruel to us poor readers! I need to know what happens next! Do we get some description of Sol licking Ky's neck?
You should've seen what I managed to do with this fic back when I was sending in-progress snippets to my beta-reader. There are so many places this could be cut for a cliffhanger that everyone else missed out on. =P You'll just have to wait and see, won't you?
This line made me wonder, is the timeline different than GG's? How old are Ky and Sol in this fic? How long have they known each other?A bit ( ... )
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Five? Why not six or seven? ;P *is shamelessly greedy*
Alas, I did my best. ;_; Maybe I can push for an epilogue or something <.
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Do push, do push! They say you should pick quality over quantity, but I'm all for quality and quantity ;P Can you tell I'm really fond of Greed in FMA?
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If it makes you feel better, I handed back the beta for part three yesterday, so that should hopefully get posted reasonably soon :) And I'm looking forward to getting part 4 - I've only seen half of it and LET ME TELL YOU - CLIFFHANGER ;_;
Greed has a kickin' coat! Why wouldn't you be fond of him ;)
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ALSO I HOPE YOU REALISE THAT EXTRA EPILOGUES WOULD INTERFERE WITH A CERTAIN TIME TRAVEL FIC.
I always liked Greed. :3 Whatever his motivation, he's one of such a very small pool of badguys who genuinely cared about their underlings. Not that I have any idea what the new Greed is getting up to these days, I am so very behind on the manga.
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<.< w-what about one epilogue then? J-just one? <.<
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ahhh FMA. I am soooooooo behind (ie haven't watched any since I cosplayed Hawkeye, and even then didn't managed to finish the anime).
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Anyway, I took a look at your profile, and saw that you like Iron Man... Half an hour ago I got linked to a little something, you may want to see it ;P
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oh my god what did I just watch-
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