A to Z in a heartbeat (U-Z)

Mar 29, 2009 23:41

Author: ragelikeafire
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine, they belong to other people that aren't me. Also thanks to Rachael Yamagata as I have pinched a line from her song.
Rating: Various - R to be safe.
AN: Urgency is dedicated to bytheguillotine Im thinking of making this into a full length for you. Let me know your thoughts.
AN2: Ok peeps, ( Read more... )

length: drabble, author: ragelikeafire, all: fiction, challenge: abcs of dwp 2009, rating: r

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ragelikeafire March 30 2009, 08:23:29 UTC
Wow that was nearly as long as my drabbles? ;)

Im surprised that no-one picked up on the Blue emergency lights outside the venue where Miranda was giving her speech. Maybe I made it too subtle? I think thats the problem when you are only trying to give a snippet and are restricted by word count. Hopefully the full length will be more nail biting.

Vocal for some reason just came to me in a lightbulb moment!

In terms of pairings unless I am going for the comedy or sickness factor I am Mirandy through and through! So I had intended whisper to be Andy longing for Miranda. I can now see how it could be so open.

Funnily enough, youth is the one I struggled with. I was thinking of something relating to the twins but then I thought that would be too obvious. Then I thought smut, so I compromised with a miranda POV with borderline smut :)

I enjoyed writing zone the most, its easier when you can relate to the surroundings. Groups of tubes stops are called zones. At first I thought about going into how Andy had got Miranda on to the tube and what they were joking about, how they would be free to be open in a city where no-one knew them, but again because of the limit it seemed to make more sense to look at it through a shocked and as usual pompous Emily's eyes.

Thanks for commenting!

Rage x

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lefevre March 31 2009, 01:00:07 UTC
I didn't think it was subtle, I caught it and the twist is what that has me itching for more. But I agree about drabbles. Sometimes the limit can hurt the storytelling. Full length! Nail-biting! Ahhh! I'm going crazy. It's not pretty.

I'm glad you wrote Zone as it is, it's definitely more of a pleasant surprising that way.

Cheers!

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