Nice chapter! Hooray, Kanda's finally awake. He's damn stubborn like this, isn't he? And Emilies, you write madness well, I can say that as someone who was told to do it well as well! 8D
As for the upcoming one...I KNEW YOU WERE GONNA DO THAT! D< How could you -- that's so horrible -- and so mean -- and fuck, who am I to talk. D: I hope this'll be the worst part of this story, because honestly, I'm starting to crave the things getting normal!
Anyway, can't wait for the update (even if I'm scared already). Keep it up!
Um... next chapter is (hopefully) the low point of the story, so after that, things should look up. Mostly. There's still another breakdown or two planned, but after the next chapter, the plot movement really begins. We hope.
Well, except for chapter thirteen, which just fails. It's like... a filler chapter or something *shudder shudder*. Thanks for the compliment on our madness :P We are of the opinion that you must be somewhat unhinged to be a writer... :D Just look at Stephen King! Yes, Kanda is stubborn, but what else is new? He's just a crazy man, but we loves him anyway.
Oh, and we were a bit nervous about the naked!scene. Was that any good? 'Cause we both embarrassed ourselves completely writing it.
You mean you're going to torture Kanda even more? O_o I admit I just hate rape fics but this fic got me hooked. Poor Kanda did he have to suffer so much? His father could have simply beat him - that is traumatizing enough for a child already. Um I'm not meaning to criticize your work, just giving my opinion.
Well, originally, Kanda was only beaten, but that kinda changed... See, Emily and I spend an inordinate amount of time plotting and/or talking about our characters, especially at night, before we go to sleep. Well, we were talking about how we were going to have to write Kanda's beatings in, and I mentioned to her, "I get the feeling that he was more than just beaten... he definitely was at least cut, and even though I hate the idea, I think he was raped, too." She agreed with me, and it kinda degenerated from there. But trust us, we both get dreams about what happened to him (although she has had the majority of those), and they were hardly pleasant. Actually, they were pretty scarring.
But thanks for your opinion! :D (We say this with all sincerity)
Oh those dreams gotta be terrible O_o Guessb it's Kanda's revenge XD; nvm he's a fictional character...
Thank you ^^ Other than that I'm really enjoying this fic. Lavi's multiple personality case makes all the sense since he spent all his life pretending to be someone else. Of course he wouldn't have a sense of self. And I like how you put them all in 21st century (though I'm sad Komui wasn't included baaaw. I love him T_T But I get why you did it like that)
Yes, they're horrible. There was definitely a week or two when we both slept terribly... (although, it kinda panned out that I got Lavi's angst while Em1 got Kanda's)
Yes, Lavi is really fun to write. :D Believe me, it killed us to, er, kill Komui. I love him, too. He's such a great man. But it's kinda impossible for him to still be alive 114 years in the future. He didn't accommodate with any Innocence (although we could have changed that, but Exorcist!Komui... just doesn't work), and he was already in his late 20s. There's no way he was still alive. Although he probably died in, like, the seventies or something. He lived a long life, at any rate.
1. Yay! :D 2. Yes, they questioned him. That was between: "He heard voices around him. Lavi’s scent was gone. Lavi was gone." and "But then he realized it was him, and he took a disjointed arm and slammed it into his head." 3. Because they are essential if you want to know just what the fuck Yuu went through. And also, it has something to do with the Lotus.
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As for the upcoming one...I KNEW YOU WERE GONNA DO THAT! D< How could you -- that's so horrible -- and so mean -- and fuck, who am I to talk. D: I hope this'll be the worst part of this story, because honestly, I'm starting to crave the things getting normal!
Anyway, can't wait for the update (even if I'm scared already). Keep it up!
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Well, except for chapter thirteen, which just fails. It's like... a filler chapter or something *shudder shudder*. Thanks for the compliment on our madness :P We are of the opinion that you must be somewhat unhinged to be a writer... :D Just look at Stephen King! Yes, Kanda is stubborn, but what else is new? He's just a crazy man, but we loves him anyway.
Oh, and we were a bit nervous about the naked!scene. Was that any good? 'Cause we both embarrassed ourselves completely writing it.
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Unhinged? Thanks for the compliment XD But yeah, it's true, in a sense.
Yes, it was good! You don't have to be embarrassed about it~ It's ... well... ALIVE, really. Great job.
(Though for the sake of fairness...I hope Lavi ain't a virgin either.)
Oh and also, yay for the first comment. : D
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But thanks for your opinion! :D (We say this with all sincerity)
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Thank you ^^ Other than that I'm really enjoying this fic. Lavi's multiple personality case makes all the sense since he spent all his life pretending to be someone else. Of course he wouldn't have a sense of self. And I like how you put them all in 21st century (though I'm sad Komui wasn't included baaaw. I love him T_T But I get why you did it like that)
Well anyways keep up the good work o/
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Yes, Lavi is really fun to write. :D Believe me, it killed us to, er, kill Komui. I love him, too. He's such a great man. But it's kinda impossible for him to still be alive 114 years in the future. He didn't accommodate with any Innocence (although we could have changed that, but Exorcist!Komui... just doesn't work), and he was already in his late 20s. There's no way he was still alive. Although he probably died in, like, the seventies or something. He lived a long life, at any rate.
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2. Yes, they questioned him. That was between: "He heard voices around him. Lavi’s scent was gone. Lavi was gone." and "But then he realized it was him, and he took a disjointed arm and slammed it into his head."
3. Because they are essential if you want to know just what the fuck Yuu went through. And also, it has something to do with the Lotus.
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More angst... I'm glad I like angst then. ^^" Hope to read the next chapter soon!
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