FanFic : Sarah Connor Chronicles : Derek Resse: A Slip Of Light

[quiet_elle]

Title : A slip of light
Drabble. 242 Words
Rating : General
Characters : Derek(POV) Sarah (Not shippy)
Summary : Derek wonders why Sarah keeps the light on.
Lovingly beta’d by un4scene

Author's note : Yep im two for two :) Everything always seems to happen at once!

Comments

[estel_willow]

Wow. Definitely looking forward to more fic. :D

This was really intreguing. I think it's always interesting, having an insight into the minds of the characters and I think this is a really well observed piece, both from Derek's point of view and as an insight into Sarah's character. Particularly the bit about the invitation (*is wearing shippy!glasses*)

Short but sweet, definitely makes a point.

*throws a partay at fic*

[quiet_elle]

i know - i cant believe im writing, must try harder to continue :)

Im trying to wear my shippy glasses but i keep getting gen. This i must rectify :D

[indiefic]

nice.

[quiet_elle]

thank you :)

[force_oblique]

wow I think tht was really perceptive and very true to the characters!
I loved the last lines!!
Really great job hun!!!

I loved how it was for Sarah always wanting to stay free, untamed!

[quiet_elle]

aww thanks hun :)

I love how you always have an insight :)

[force_oblique]

Aww wow, I am glad you think so! <33

[roxybisquaint]

I love this one too. You should write more of these.

[quiet_elle]

well thank you again :)