Opinions Please!!!
Okay - please let me know what you think about this - be honest - I need criticism! I have never done this before, so I have no idea what I'm doing!
Okay, here is what I have:
"Nancy, I want to note how beautiful you look today, and also what a beautiful couple you and Luis make together. I am so lucky to have you as an older sister. I want to thank you for always being there, and for being an amazing example to me, Rachel and Nathan. I have always admired your strength, your independence, and your confidence in who you are and what you believe in. Through your own life experience, you have given me advice over the years that has stuck with me and helped me more than you know. Luis, I am so glad that you and Nancy have found each other and I want to welcome you and your family into ours. I am so happy for you both and I wish you a lifetime together, full of love and joy."
Okay, here is what I have:
"Nancy, I want to note how beautiful you look today, and also what a beautiful couple you and Luis make together. I am so lucky to have you as an older sister. I want to thank you for always being there, and for being an amazing example to me, Rachel and Nathan. I have always admired your strength, your independence, and your confidence in who you are and what you believe in. Through your own life experience, you have given me advice over the years that has stuck with me and helped me more than you know. Luis, I am so glad that you and Nancy have found each other and I want to welcome you and your family into ours. I am so happy for you both and I wish you a lifetime together, full of love and joy."