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Part Three meeks00 March 27 2010, 23:26:34 UTC
Walt hums his agreement, the vibrations flowing down Ray’s cock, and Walt slips his tongue licking around the head and the slit. Ray feels a shudder pulse through his body.

“Oh my God,” Ray moans, and he drops a hand from the wheel to cup the back of Walt’s head. Walt uses his hand to pump Ray’s cock where his mouth won’t reach, and he uses his other hand to hold his hips steady because Ray can’t ever help it when Walt looks like that, when he does that. “Walt, Jesus - I could fuckin’ die right now.”

Walt pulls his mouth away for a moment to say, “I’d rather you didn’t, because I’m in the car with you. Fuckin’ pull over if you’re gonna lose it.” And then his mouth’s back to work and Ray’s trying to keep his free hand steady on the wheel and his eyes following the lines of the road.

Walt starts sucking harder, as if he’s just trying to make Ray crash them into a ditch, and Ray can’t help it that he applies a bit of pressure to the back of Walt’s head. Walt makes a small sound, and Ray can feel the head of his cock against the guy’s throat.

When Walt unclenches the hand he has around Ray’s cock, Ray almost feels relief, but then his mind honest to God goes blank when Walt braces himself with one hand on Ray’s thigh and the other on his hip and swallows him down.
“Oh shit. Your fuckin' mouth, Walt,” Ray breathes, and he swerves onto the shoulder of the road because he’s about to come so hard that he absently thinks he might die from it. Walt pulls of Ray’s cock just as Ray comes, and his jizz shoots all over the dash, steering wheel, and windshield.

“Wha - did we just crash?” Walt exclaims, voice a bit raw from deep-throating and possibly from surprise that they’re parked.

Ray moans and lets his head fall against the headrest of his seat. “You could say that.”

Walt sits up and grins at him. “Feel better?”

Ray laughs and pulls him in for a kiss. “You always make me feel better,” he says, and he doesn’t care that he sounds like a fuckin’ pansy-ass right now. Walt does that to him sometimes. “I have to say, though, that this may be your best method yet.”

fin

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 27 2010, 23:27:33 UTC
Ah shi-yit. Anon fail. WTF-ever. I'm running out the door and felt like joining in sharing time. Adios.

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Re: Part Three queeniegalore March 28 2010, 01:39:55 UTC
AAAAARGH! MIKA I'M SO HAPPY YOU DID THIS!

This was adorable and funny and SO HOT OH MY GOD. I loved it, loved the banter and Ray being such a bitch and Walt so calm and used to dealing with him. And uuugggh, Walt, you kinky little thing. He's so SEXY when he's like that.

I love you and I love that you wrote this. YAY!

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 29 2010, 13:02:38 UTC
LOL Glad you liked ;) Walt is kinky, eh? And yet so coy. What a sterling combination. No wonder Ray can't resist!

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Re: Part Three l_s_d_me March 28 2010, 01:47:08 UTC
oh my god. ilu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 29 2010, 13:03:07 UTC
Hahaha you ego-booster! ♥

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Re: Part Three pjvilar March 28 2010, 02:24:10 UTC
Woo to the fucking hoo, Mika! Fucking awesome!

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 29 2010, 13:03:26 UTC
:D SO GLAD YOU LIKED.

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 29 2010, 13:03:55 UTC
;) Your caps make me giddy! Thanks, bb!

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 28 2010, 02:51:20 UTC
Thank you SOOOO MUUUUCH!! This was awesome ♥

And I love your icon btw :D

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 29 2010, 13:04:56 UTC
Yay! Thank you! And I do love the icon too ;) It's by oxoniensis!!

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Re: Part Three ermynee224 March 28 2010, 07:43:13 UTC
EEEE! LOL who is judging you for the Ray/Walt-ness. They're kinda turning into my OTP of the show so they're going to have to judge me too. I'm just grateful you keep turning out AMAZING fics of them <3

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 29 2010, 13:06:09 UTC
They're kinda turning into my OTP of the show

THIS. I had no OTP forever -- I prided myself on my multi-pairing love! But apparently Ray/Walt has crept up on me, and you, apparently! They're spreading. It's a fact.

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Re: Part Three meeks00 March 29 2010, 13:06:43 UTC
LOL OMG. I just noticed your icon. SO TRUE. Forehead bang onto the keyboard, more like, with pictures like that.

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Re: Part Three hidari_blue March 28 2010, 07:45:14 UTC
YOU ARE MADE OF SO MUCH WIN, IDEK. HOW ARE YOU SO AWESOME!?

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