Starting a home for crapfics

Feb 09, 2006 21:46

I'm using this space to put some of the crapfics I find that get deleted. This time around, we have "Love Me, Master" by Takeya_hater. This crapfic is set in the DearS fandom. The author has a very unhealthy fixation with destroying the lead male, Takeya. He gives us text blocks of doom, and some very nasty descriptions of Ren torturing Takeya.

Warning!! This fic is rated NC-17!! Do not view if you are under 17!! It's also not brain safe too.

DearS: Love me, Master
by Takeya_hater!

Chapter 1: Caught

Disclaimer: I don't own DearS but I know I'd be a HELL of a better lover than that asshole Takeya. Hell, a goddamn slug could be a better lover than that motherfucker Takeya.

Takeya came home with Ren fol. low in. him that day. He found some shackles on the wall now. "What are these for?" He asked. She slapped the shackles in him. "Master, Ren loves you. Master does not love Ren. Ren will make master love Ren." She then took out a whip and cracked it a few time. "Ren, I love you!" Takeya said. "You are not sin sere. Ren will make master love Ren." She hit her with the whip. "ow." He screamed in pain. The pain was intense, like someone tore a chunk from his ribs. Ren struck her 10 times in arrow. "Ow." was his reaction. DearS are stronger than humans, and he was feeling the full force of her strength. She stud fed an old, smelly sock into his mouth. He gauged in it; he hated the taste. "Does master love Ren now?" Ren asked. "Yes yes I love you!" He said, hoping in vein this would stop Herr from further punishing him. No luck, though. "You lie." She struck her again. "Ah." He grimaced in pain. She hit her again and again, each stroke harder than the last. "Ren wants master to love her." Ren said. She smacked the whip across her ass. "Ow, that's hurt." He said. "Please top." She was n 't moved By his words. She wanted him to love her for real. He couldn't do that to her satisfaction. She gave her painful welts and red marks all over her torso. Every welt and mark brought forth excrushiating pain. She was merciless to the whip. She hit herb over and over, until she was out of breath. She then stared deep into the eyes of Takeya. "Does master love Ren now?" She asked. "Please Ren, stop this..." Takeya begged. She wouldn't. She hit her over and over until the blood spilled. "Ow. Ren, why are you doing this?" He asked. "Ren wants master to love Ren. Master must beg Ren to heel him." She replied. "Okay.... Ren, please heel me." Takeya begged. Ren heeled him just enough to stop the blood, but the pain was still there. He hurt all over, as there wasn't no spot where Ren's whip had struck him. The pain was excrushiating. Takeya passed out from the pain. Ren through some water on his face to wake him up. It stung like hell and did his job. "ow." he said. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She hit her hard one more time, drawing his blood. "Gah. For the love of god. please stop." Takeya begged Ren. He might as well have asked the walls for help. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. "Ren must go use toilet, but Ren will return. Ren want you to think about things." TAKeya was left hanging by his wrists while Ren used the toilet. When she came back she stood opposite him. "Does master love Ren now?" Ren asked. Takeya didn't respond. He was out cold. She cracked her whip on the g round. He then looked up at Ren. "Why, Ren? Why are you doing this?" Takeya asked. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She held up the whip. "Master, do you want more?" "For the love of God, no! Okay, I'm sorry I was an asshole to you! I Regret hurting you!" He said. She starred at him coldly. "Master does not like Ren. Master will have to suck his own cock." She then forced his head down to his cock. He took it into his mouth and started to suck it. He hated the taste of his brushed cock. It hurt him to sick his cock, but he feared her even more. He got erect from his blowjob, and Ren really wasn't satisfied. She undressed and demeaned he lick her cunt. Takeya licked her cunt as best he could. It wasn't easy as he had several bruises on hiss cheeks. He tan his tongue deep into her cunt, but it didn't make her happy. "Deeper, master." She demanded. She whacked her hard cock with the whip. "Ow." He said, biting his tongue in the process. He hurt all over, and Ren would n't let him stop. She demanded he lick her cunt more. Takeya did as best he could, but could never come close to satisfying her. She hit her on the balls and he started going numb with pain down there. His cock was as limp as a dishrag but she wanted him hard. It made the pain more in tense when she hit her. Whack, whack, whack, went the whip as he hurt. "Does master love Ren now?" Ren asked. She hit her on the balls for good measures. "Ren, I love you with all my heart. Please stop." Takeya said. "Ren loves master, but master does not like Ren." She said. She struck her hard with the whip in her stomach. He was now bleeding from that wound. Ren stepped away from Takeya. "Ren is tired. Ren will sleep in master's bed were Ren belongs." She said. She left him chained to the wall all night.

-Continued in part 2-

Chapter 2: Stick it to 'em

the next morning, Ren came over to Takeya. He was still shackled to the wall, and red with welts all over his body. Ren pulled his head up and saw he was sleeping. "Wake up, master. I have more for you today." She said. Ren had a number of bamboo sticks with her now. They were long, flat, and pointed at one end. "Master is hungry? Ren will serve master chopsticks." She then forced Takeya's mouth open, and stuck a bamboo stick in her tongue. "Ow." Takeya screamed in pain. He was bleeding in his mouth, but Ren heeled him so he wouldn't bleed. "No Ren... stop this..." Takeya said. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She took another stick and jabbed it underneath the fingernail of his left hand. Excruciating pain flowed like honey all throughout Takeya's body. Ren stuck more bamboo sticks in her hands, one underneath each fingernail. Takeya screamed in pain as she inserted each one. "Please Ren. I'm begging you. Stop." He pleaded in vein. Ren wouldn't here of any of his please. She twisted each one around, adding to the horrific pain she was experiencing. She moved the bamboo sticks deeper and deeper, always healing him just enough to stop the blood from flowing. Each twist brought more pain and more blood. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. Ren then placed her hands on the ground and stepped on them. She jumped up and down on her hands, shifting the sticks around as she did. Takeya could only cream in pain as Ren did this. Ren jumped on her hands several times before stopping. When she stepped off her hands, they were covered in blood and numb from pain. Ren looked Takeya deep in the eye. "Does master love Ren now?" She asked. She took a bamboo stick and stuck it in her cock, right up the urethra. Takeya felt like she was trying to stuff an elephant in his cock, the pain felt like his cock would explode. Ren moved the stick back and forth in his urethra, and each stroke caused severe pain. Blood was drawn but Ren healed her just enough to stop the blood. Ren did this for a while, and then stepped on her cock. She grinded her heel into her cock, making the already unbearable pain even worse. Takeya could only scream as he was hurt further. Ren stuck another bamboo stick in her urethra. This hurt even more than before. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. "Ow." He screamed in excrushiating pain. He was suffering all over his body. Ren inserted some bamboo sticks underneath Takeya's toenail too. She also jumped up and down on his toes, and heeled him whenever blood spat fourth. The pain was so in tense that Takeya became numb from it. He slumped over and passed out. Ren decided to give him a meal here, because he's hungry. This meal consisted of moldy bread, maggot-laden meat, and scummy water. Ren started by throwing the scummy water on her. This woke him up, and he screamed in pain. Every fibber of his being was in the most excrushiating pain humanly possible. Nothing on him didn't hurt none. Takeya got moldy bread shoved into her mouth next. He gagged on it, but was forced to swallow it. He gagged on the maggot-ladies meat too, but chewed and swallowed it. He felt very sick in addition to the excrushiating pain. She made her swallow some of the scummy water. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. "Please Ren, stop..." He begged in vein. She took six bamboo sticks and shoved them up her asshole. Takeya could only scream in pain as her asshole was pierced. He was in in tense pain that shot from hiss asshole to his brain. The pain was unbearable, as he felt Ren shove then in as far as they would go. "Does master love Ren now?" She asked. Takeya couldn't respond; he was too hurt and weak to move. "Ren must go to school now. Ren will return later." She said.

Chapter 3: It's shocking!

When Ren returned from school, the place was a mess. Takeya was unable to keep his breakfast down, and threw up all over himself. "Master has been very dirty." Ren said. She threw the scummy water on her to clean him up. This got the vomit off of him. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She tool out a device and plugged it in. It had two clips on it. Ren attached the clips to the bamboo sticks in her dick. This sent an electronic shock throughout her. "Ow." Takeya screamed. "Ren, please stop." "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She gave her another shock. He was already hurting from the bamboo sticks in various parts of her body. He was numb with pain all over. Ren gave her another electric shock. The pain was even more in tense than before. He grimaced in pain; he could no longer voice his displeasure. He opened his mouth and no sound came out. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. Ren then moved the electrodes; one was on the bamboo stick in this thumb, and the other was on the bamboo stick in her toe. She gave her another jolt. It hurt like hell, but she kept the power going. "Does master love Ren now?" She asked. "..." was all Takeya could say. His vision was blurry, and every fiber of his being was in such pain he could not stand it. He wanted her to stop, he really did. but she wouldn't stop. Ren kept giving him electronic shocks over and over. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She then moved the electrodes around. One she put on the bamboo stick on her tongue, the other was attacked to a stick on her cock. Ren sent another electric shock through her, and made her scream in pain. Takeya was already in pain to begin with, but the pain was extremely unbar able. He hurt all over, but that didn't stop Ren from giving her another jolt. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She gave him several more shocks, each one more painful than the last. Zap, zap, zap in a row. Takeya couldn't take anymore, and passed out. Ren heeled him enough to stop the blood from flowing. She had dinner and went back to his comma toes body. Ren threw the scummy water in his face, waking Takeya up again. He woke up and found himself unable to move. He was in so much pain that he felt dying would be preferable to living. Ren moved the electrodes around again, moving the one that was on the bamboo stick in his asshole to one of his toes. Ren shocked her again. "Ouch." Takeya screamed. "Kill me, Ren. Kill me and just get it over with." Takeya begged. "Killing is too good for master. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She shocked her again, increasing the already agonizing pain. He wanted to die. He couldn't take no more. Ren wouldn't let him die though. She wanted him to live. She wanted him to suffer as much as he made her suffer, if not more. She gave her more shocks off and on throughout the night until he went comma toes again. She threw the scummy water on him, and woke him up. Ren heeled him just enough to keep him alive. At the end of the evening, Ren moved away from him. "Ren must sleep now, but Ren will be back. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said.

Chapter 4. Rats in Heat

The next morning, Ren woke up and got ready for the day. Since it was a holiday, Ren did not have to go to school. She came to Takeya holding a rat in her hands. It looked very agitated. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She threw scummy water in Takeya's face to wake him up. He did so, weak from hunger and blurry-eyed. Ren held up Takeya's head. "Rat is friend of Ren. Does master like rat?" Ren asked. "Ren... please stop..." Takeya begged. "Ren thinks master should kiss rat." She held the rat's face to hers, and it bit her upper lip. "Ow." Takeya shouted as the rat bit her. The rat the was allowed to crawl all over Takeya's body. It sank its claws into Takeya's welt-riddled flesh as it crawled round on her. Blood and pain flowed like water as Takeya screamed. "Please... make it stop..." Ren refused to do so. Every time the rat crawled off of him, Ren would pick it back up and put it on his body. After several scratches were inflicted, Ren took the rat and shoved it up her asshole. She screamed as the rat clawed and bit at her rectum. "Ren. Make it stop." Takeya begged. The rat managed to get its head out of Takeya's asshole after a lot of clawing and biting, But Ren stuck its head back inside her asshole. The rat continued to try to bite and claw its way out of her asshole, but Ren wouldn't let it leave. She heeled Takyea just enough to prevent the rat from exiting his asshole. After about 10 minutes of biting and clawing, the rat suffocated and died. It would be stuck up Takeya's asshole forever. "Ren is hungry. Ren wants lunch. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. Ren left the room. After about an hour, Ren returned with a hibachi in toe. She lit up the coals and stuck an iron bar into the fire. Takeya was now blind from pain. He wondered what he was hearing; the world seemed hazy to him, because the pain was just over whelming. Takeya's vision cleared enough to see a fuzzy red shape at the end of a brownish black shape. Ren then stuck the red-hot poker on her tongue. The smell of burning flesh was nauseating to Takeya. He wanted to scream but couldn't. Ren ripped the poker off her tongue & stuck it back into the fire. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She let the poker get red hot again and then took it out of the fire. Takeya let out a silent scream as she touched her face with the poker. The smell of burning flesh was very nauseating. The pain Takeya was feeling was unbar able. She pulled the hot poker back from her, leaving a massive burn mark and some smoke in her wake. He was in total pain; every fiber of his being ached with the pain of 1,000,000 pains. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She stuck the iron back into the fire. She threw scummy water on her to keep here awake. Once the iron was hot enough, Ren stuck the iron on her chest. Takeya opened his mouth wide yet no sound emerged. He was in so much pain he couldn't scream. He was in very in tense pain, the kind of which you wouldn't wish on your own worst enemy. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. He didn't hear this, because the next poke went into her left ear. Smoke spewed forth as flesh burned and pain ensued. "Does master love Ren now?" She asked as she put the iron back into the hot coals. When it was hot enough, she stuck the poker into her other ear. Flesh and bamboo burned, giving off a sick smell. The eardrum burst and blood flowed. Ren pulled the poker back, tearing some flesh off with it. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. She heeled him enough to stop the blood from flowing as she put the poker into the hot coals. She close to slide the poker onto her stomach. The burning smell make her sick. Takeya dry heaved, his stomach empty. Ren heated up the poker again, and then shoved it down his urethra. Takeya was in extreme pain as Ren seared the inside of his cock. He continued to hurt as Ren removed the hot poker from his urethra, taking a layer of cells with it. Ren placed the hot poker back into the fire. "Ren loves master, but master does not love Ren." She said. Once it wax red hot, she took the hot poker and shoved it up her asshole. This was the final straw. Takeya died when Ren moved the hot poker up her asshole as far as it would go. Ren removed the hot poker and stared at the burnt, bleeding, lifeless body before her. Ren then took a bite of his seered flesh. She got aroused by it. "Master tastes good" she said as she swallowed. She took more bits out of his seered flesh, each one brought her more pleasure. She bit off his cock, chewed it up, and swallowed it. This caused Ren to orgasm.

Chapter 5. The New Master

Ren took Takeya's lifeless, rotting corpse and threw it into Tokyo Bay. It sank like a rock into the water. She went home and cleaned up the place. "Ren now does not have a master." She said. "Ren wants a master." She went outside and walked down the street for a bit. That's when she ran into him. Physically, he was tall, with light green hair, blue eyes, a smile that could melt the coldest of hearts, and a very muscular body. He was 182 cm of muscle and brains. One look and Ren was captivated by his good looks. He was shirtless and clad only in a pair of swimtrunks and sandals. He had planned to go to the beach. "Man, just once I'd like to have a hot babe in my league." He said. Women always threw themselves at him, but he wanted that something extra in a girl. Ren Spotted him and went up to him. "Hi there. My name is Marty. What's yours?" Marty asked. "Ren is Ren." She said. She approached Marty, stars in her eyes. Ren was deeply smitten with Marty. "Ren likes Marty." She said. Marty invited her inside. There he smiled at her. "You are very pretty, Ren." Ren smiled. "Ren needs new master. Will Marty be Ren's master?" She asked. "Of course. I'd like to taste your loving, Ren." Marty said. She eagerly entered his arms and pulled his body close to hers. She put her head on his broad shoulder and moaned softly into his ear. "Ren loves her new master." She said. He felt the warmth of her hot, tight, athletic body next to his. He got a warm feeling all over as she held her close. They then kiss, and it felt good to both of them. Ren, will you suck my cock?" Marty asked. "Ren would do anything for her new master." She replied. His clothing fell like a man with a bullet in his back. Ren eagerly bent down, sticking that hot, tight, curly ass of hers into the air. She licked her cock and then sucked it. Marty felt up Ren's cur ass, and she loved it. He ordered her to undress, and she did, while contenting to suck his fully hard 9 inches of love. Ren loved the taste of Marty's cock. "Ren will do anything for her new master." She said. At long last, his 10 inches of cock was begging to enter Ren's hot cunt. He laid down and she star deled him. She then guided his throbbing cock into her eager, wet cunt. She let out a squeal of joy as Marty started pumping her cunt hard. "Ren will do anything for her new master." She said. He fucked him good, and then had her climax right as he came. Ren felt completely as her cunt squeezed his 11 inch cock. "I love you, Ren." He said. "Ren loves new master." She replied. They rested and fucked again at the same time. They fucked and rested all night and all day at the same time for three days. Each orgasm Ren had made her love Marty more and more. At the end of that time, Ren made a cozy meal for 2 and they ate together. Afterwards, the two of them lived very happy, long lives together and in love.

Author's Note: That's my first fic, everyone! Hoped you enjoyed it! Let me know how much you liked it. If you didn't like it, I DON'T WANT TO HEAR ABOUT IT! Warm fuzzes only, please. I give them to you!
- Marty "Takeya_Hater" Gardener.
Next post
Up