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Entry #02 - "Blank Canvas" (2 of 3)

Apr 18, 2006 17:43

Title: Blank Canvas, part 2
Written By: ayesakara
Timeline: Post Season 5
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Genre: Angst, romance

( Blank Canvas, part 2 )

Comments 23

seanmegansean April 19 2006, 14:25:31 UTC

Thank goodness for that last line *grumble*

irya_angelus April 20 2006, 04:05:40 UTC

oh my god, i know. this chapter almost gave me a heart attack, lol. :runs off to read the third part: o

ayesakara May 2 2006, 16:09:48 UTC

I am glad it was only an "almost". :D

ayesakara May 2 2006, 16:08:43 UTC

*grins* I know what you mean. I was grumbling at Justin around this time too! :X

BC chapter 2 camlaw April 21 2006, 06:33:58 UTC

I love the shoulder biting scene. I also love the idea that not everything between Michael and Brian is smoothed over. Although I think Michael's stance on Brian's "temporary insanity" was slightly harsh. Michael can be oblivious at times, but he always manages to finally come around. Look forward to reading part 3.

Re: BC chapter 2 ayesakara May 2 2006, 16:24:04 UTC

The main issue I took was about Mikey's utter blankness regarding Brian's feelings for his son, as was so clearly apparent in canon 512. And of Mel's bitterness towards Brian, also evidenced in canon 512. One thing led to another and the next thing I knew I was writing Mikey talking about B/J. Perhaps, I did take an extreme look at it but honestly speaking, there are times when these people can be very very blind towards Brian ( ... )

mary_mccrone January 28 2013, 14:42:39 UTC

This story was written so long ago and I don't know if you'll even see this reply.But I for one am so glad you decided to get it out of your system.Thank you.It's a great story.

vlredreign April 21 2006, 21:42:11 UTC

I knew there was a reason that I didn't like Michael. What I'm loving is the new relationship that Brian and Justin have, one where they are more equal than they've ever been. And reading about the restoration projects are awesome. I could totally see Justin doing this; it feeds into his 'civic duty' fetish.

ayesakara May 2 2006, 16:27:33 UTC

Yep, I thought Justin's work with the murals and the progress he makes with Brian as a partner... were meant to go together. I am so glad you enjoyed this. :)

vlredreign May 2 2006, 16:39:16 UTC

And you won first place!! Congrats, it really was a wonderful story. I want to read more of your work.

ayesakara May 2 2006, 17:46:23 UTC

Thanks! :) I haven't done a lot of QAF stuff. But you can find the few B/J stories I've written in various places, including my f-locked journal. If you wanna read them, you could friend me, and I would friend you back so that you can read them. :)

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ayesakara May 2 2006, 16:34:04 UTC

And here I thought you meant Garland. :D

Oh, it pleases me so much that you think I did justice to Justin's voice. Yep, I am a Brian girl but I adore Justin too.

Thank you for the amazing review. I love it to pieces! Glad you thought the issues were handled believably in the story. I appreciate all your comments! :X

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ayesakara May 2 2006, 16:39:59 UTC

I believe sometimes you need distance to develop perspective about things that are laid out right before you. I believe being away from Brian would make Justin think about all the ways Brian had showed his commitment and all the ways Justin had misunderstood in the past. I also believe misunderstanding Brian's reasons for keeping those momentos from their past could cause Justin unwarranted grief. That's my take on it.

I am glad you enjoyed reading. :)