'Please, Sir' (Dom/Billy, NZ, early 2000)

[unstealthy]

Title: "Please. Sir."
Authors: msilverstar and unstealthy
Pairing: Billy Boyd/Dominic Monaghan
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Dominance/submission, beating
Disclaimer: Fiction, not true, we made it up
Summary/Excerpt: "I want to see you see yourself," Billy says, a little sternly, "see you obeying me."
Series Note: This is set in an alternate universe where Dom, Billy and

Comments

[silentdescant]

nnnngh, this is so hot. you guys always seem to know when I'm craving some good D/s fic. ♥

[msilverstar]

I'd forgot how hot it was! We're trying to post more often.

[eff_reality]

Ah, these images will stick with me. :D

Thank you!

[msilverstar]

that's lovely feedback, you are welcome!

[tweedle_]

I bloody well burnt my dinner because of this! :) Really, I did. :D

I love the way they are both finding their feet in this new thing they are trying. The confusion and the caution of both of them feels so real. I do like BDSM that smacks *g* of reality. I particularly liked how both were so careful in the beginning - neither wanting to influence the other's choice. Wonderfully graphic and hot. Love it. :D

[unstealthy]

Oh, I'm so sorry about your dinner but happy that you enjoyed it so much!

Thank you for the lovely, thoughtful feedback. Much appreciated.

[foxrafer]

So very vivid, a scene that kind of etches itself in your brain. Really wonderful.

[msilverstar]

thank you, thank you!

One of my favorite things is uncertainty during sex, that tension of not being sure and yet trying anyway. (wow, was that hard to articulate). I think we did it here.

[babydazzle]

[unstealthy]

Thank you so much for commenting. I like Dom begging, too. :)