Ohh the things I have written....

Apr 21, 2009 23:33

"AnnaBell's Frist Case #1" by Laurel Rowse age 7 (or so)

Once upon a time there lived a gril named AnnaBell and friend Elizbeth! One day AnnaBell joined The Detive agsony! Witch Lizzie allreay had jioned in the summer!

Then one day Fall cam agin so.... back to school they went! And they soon found out that there Teacher worked for a backery! So she sined them up for some food classes! So the next day after school they all went with there Teacher to the backery for food class!

"Now class" said Teacher "Frist we are going to find out how we make sand wicthes! First we tack some bean tree. Then we cut the weate and take it to the mill to grind it but I can not show you the mill! So we will go on to the lettce, carrots, beans, parsley, and greenpeper. We have to grow thease from seeds.

"Now would you guys like some?"
"NO"
"YUK"
They all shoted. We do not want to take food class any moor! But the teacher said "No" Please just meet my emplyes? "O.K." They said but that is the last day we are going to be heer!
"Good by"!

So the next day after school... They all folled teacher agin! Teacher lead them inside to meet her empolyes. There was... Ned, Samata, Boorke, and Calion and teacher of corse. Then they all left expt Anna and Lizzie!

Lizzie said
"Come on Anne"
"lets get going" but Anna did not hear her! Anna had sawn Brooke ran out of the store! She was about to ask about it when she heard Ned say C'mon Brookey!

Then teacher said why don't you finsh that word puzzel she had just put out! "NO" said Anna! Are you hugrey said Teacher go get a bean and I will give you some pizza!

"NO" She said agin! and stoped her feet so that they thout that she had goon to get a bean! then they dove off some were! Anna said "Lizzie let's folloy them"! "O.K." she said so they did.

They folled them to a shop then went in the shop that was full of China but nobody was there! Then they saw them and they [said] "You guys go back NOW"
"NO" They said and went into the back room wich had nothing in it but a phone and some empty shelfs! Then they peeked out and saw-

Them slip out the door! They had stolen all of the china! Then anna called the cops and the cop came but they were allready out of site so....

The cops meet them at the Bakery and put them in Jail and they paid the store and Anna and Lizzie for the damege.

The End!

~ Found this story and thought it was hilarious, spelling, grammar, storyline, and all. Besides, I am procrastinating. I know Betsy will enjoy this; I bet you see this sort of thing all day!
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