[X] Finger

[puppe]

Title: Finger
Author: Elf Asato
Written: 03/12/05 - 09/10/05
Summary: Post-X17 Fuuma/Subaru smut (or is it Subaru/Fuuma?).
Disclaimer: Not mine whatsoever.
Notes: Way back when I started this, I knew why it was called Finger, but now I've forgotten, really.... Thanks to denpagirl for being there from the beginning and being online while I finished it so I

Comments

[mefiant]

OMG.

:D

You have so converted me to Fubaru, you saucy thing. I love the writing style, so abstract and kind of lazily feverish. It kind of folds over and over itself in a weird tangle, just like real thoughts. The last line is especially lovely, with the macabre innocence that just exactly sums up Sakurazukamori!Subaru. Your Fuuma also pwnz - he reminds me of you, which makes sense? XD He's very calculating and knowing etc., but still doesn't really know what's going on... (which isn't to say anything about you, just that the general impression was very much you in style etc.).

[ryutsuki]

I literally did a little dance when I saw that I converted you 8D

Oh wow, so many awesome compliments, thank you! But yes, it does make sense about Fuuma, haha, and when you put it that way, yeah that's quite my style XD I feel the lazily feverishness of the writing, too, so I'm quite happy that you noticed and said that!

[mefiant]

XD I never liked Fuuma, and then I reread X and I read your fics and... gah! ♥ *pokes* Your writing style is very distinctive.

[ryutsuki]

Haha, I actually wasn't that into Fuuma at first, but as I thought about him more and more, I began to really, really like him as a character. Actually, because of you, I've really begun to like Yuuto/Subaru. I mean, it will never replace my Fubaru OTP (or teh OT3), but it's up there :D

And hooray!

[emudii]

Wow. Just... wow. That is the hottest piece of mindfuck I've read in a great, long while. I wish I could say something more coherent or helpful, but it is nearly three in the morning and I'm dying. XD

[ryutsuki]

That's quite the compliment! ^^ Thank you very much for reading!

[emudii]

I admire you very much, for the great amount of depth and improvement that I've seen in your fics over the last year. And, also, your dedication to this pairing. I've thoroughly enjoyed the way that these two have developed, through your pen, over time. If I hadn't already been a hopeless fangirl, you would have totally converted me. And, as such, I am now stalking this journal. <3

[ryutsuki]

Oh wow, I'm speechless and blushing. That almost never happens (I'm not a blusher)!

I can't say that I've always been a fan of this pairing (I started out as a rabid S/S-shipper four years ago), but when I actually began to write fics, I found I couldn't really write S/S. I'm not sure how it happened, but instead I found my niche in Fuuma/Subaru. But it's sad that more people don't write for this wonderful pairing! I've found very few fics beyond my own...

But...wow. Thank you so much!

[sophiap]

He knew, from both former friends, that Subaru had always been a little lacking in sanity

Hee! Is it wrong that I love Craxy!Subaru? I also love that Fuuma was not nearly as much in control of the situation as he thought he was.

Also, I'm not normally a fan of squishing together names to indicate pairings, I love the term "Fubaru" for these two. It's just so...apt.

[ryutsuki]

Haha, it's never wrong! I love Crazy!Subaru as well. I always write crazySakurazukamori!Subaru because I can't write angstyNormal!Subaru... It was meant to be quite focused on Subaru, but it ended up as being considerably focused on Fuuma, as well...

Fubaru is love! It was denpagirl who told me that FUBAR = Fucked Up Beyond All Repair, so yes, it's very apt! XD