Send in the clowns
This is for joss100
Title: Send in the clowns
Author: killerweasel
Rating: R
Character(s): Lindsey McDonald, Angel
Prompt: 078. Root of all Evil insane challenge
Word Count: 552
AU after Underneath
Send in the clowns
( under here )
Title: Send in the clowns
Author: killerweasel
Rating: R
Character(s): Lindsey McDonald, Angel
Prompt: 078. Root of all Evil insane challenge
Word Count: 552
AU after Underneath
Send in the clowns
( under here )
Still beautiful.
“You want evil,” Angel snarled as he watched the last moments of Lindsey MacDonald. “This is evil.”
Angel undid his pants, let his hard cock protrude out, stroked it some, letting it fill with Lindsey’s blood.
He grabbed a dagger from his desk, which he’d been idly playing with when Lindsey came in and made a small cut just under the head of his cock.
Angel lifted Lindsey from the floor, pressing Lindsey’s face against his cock, smearing Lindsey’s face with blood.
“Suck me.”
Lindsey’s lips found the wound, licked at it to start then sucked at it in earnest taking Angel’s cock head into his mouth.
“Yes Lindsey, suck me, and reclaim what I took from you.”
Angel’s head lolled back as Lindsey’s mouth moved around the cock head. Angel fucking Lindsey’s mouth. His chest heaving from the heady thrill of blood loss and a blowjob.
A gasp and shudder from Angel as semen joined the blood flowing into Lindsey.
“Holy shit,” Angel cried out as Lindsey continued to suck draining him of come and almost blood.
Angel pulled away from Lindsey letting him fall to the floor again. He staggered and fell against his desk. Gaining purchase on the wood he pulled himself into his chair, collapsing into the soft leather.
“Welcome to my world, turning your sorry ass is as evil as I can possibly be,” Angel said then smirked and passed out.
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I think this should be 'Angel fucked Lindsey's mouth. His chest heaved from the heady thrill of blood loss and a blowjob.' The rest seems to all be in past tense, that bit is more present.
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