30 Days and 30 Nights: Day 18

[prowlerprime]

Title: 30 Days and 30 Nights
Day: 18
Prompt: Guardian
*Verse: G1 AU
Rating: PG
*Words: 1125
Other Characters: Prowl, Optimus, Ironhide, Ratchet, Bumblebee
Warnings: none
Summary:  Optimus listens to the arguments on whether or not Prowl would be a satisfactory guardian for an orphaned sparkling.
Notes: I'm not that happy with this one.  But it was the best

Comments

[prancingtiger86]

You showed them Prowl! and that last line from Bluestreak was completely and utterly adorable. fantastic fic hun and it perfectly fitted in with the prompt, nicely done! :)

[prowlerprime]

Thanks. Glad you liked it and found Blue adorable. That was the whole point even if I didn't get the fic the way I wanted. Thanks again. :D

[wicked3659]

Aww you sell yourself short, this is lovely. I really felt Prowl's convictions when he spoke and the discomfort he gave the other mechs spoke volumes, this was really well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it <3

[prowlerprime]

Thanks. :) The only part I was happy with was Prowl's speech. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[insane_no_baka]

:) Well, I liked it. No, I LOVED it. I was all, "Jerkjerkjerks! YOU TELL THEM PROWL!" then I was all, "See! See! Prowl is an awesome guardian! Ha!" Loved the last line by Blue. LOVED IT. *pants for breath* XD

[prowlerprime]

Well, I'm glad someone like it. lol

[bluetaelon]

I really liked this one although Blue's line for some reason had me groaning and thinking... oh god... Barney... still chuckled but yep, Barney moment.

[prowlerprime]

Yeah, well I said it sucked.

The only Barney I know well is Barney Rubble from the Flinstones. I"m aware of some purple dino called Barney, that's about it. My neice was into Blues Clues when she was a baby anyways.

[prowlerprime]

Wow, Prowl's first pomp pomp dance! lol Thanks for reading! :D