well. it did. because your writing is amazing sweetie. i really hope you know that. ♥
but it also made me really sad because it's such a broken story and you not capitalizing anything made it that much more... real, i guess is the word i'm looking for. the first part of paragraph 4, i think, is my favorite. the emotions are so clear and the whole story really made me fall into their world. i was listening to the song as well, btw. i adore it. ♥
but ugh. i just... i want to cry. and i was half crying at the sex as well as you were because it was so painstakingly beautiful.
i don't have anything else intelligent to say. this was really amazing sweetie. really, really amazing.
i told kori i got into a panic attack because my net got cut before i had a chance to edit this fully and jsdklfjsdlf i re-read it and didn't feel a thing so i thought i ran on with sentences too long and heck i'm always starting each paragraphs with the same words!!! D:
i think though, i was crying at the sex because this was based on a heartbreaking rp and idk, it was... :/ but when i reread i doubted it would make anyone cry so. thanks a lot.
you don't need to have to say anything. your praise means a lot to me! :D
no reason to ♥ but lol, the length of kangteuk scares me. i usually don't read them but i want to but i'm going to go stalk some kanghyuk as backup XD /notweird.
because it took me forever to get to reading this and just suddenly remembered... epic comment! maybe
&&you already know how much i love the prelude right? it's perfect in so many ways D: /jealous.
he's tumbling right down the road of depression and heartbreak and fully aware of it, yet unable to do anything. oh sobs. honestly, i didn't know what to quote because it's all so good and real and i totally went 'yay! sandcastles' to ;____; because gah, i hate that helpless feeling where you know things are going wrong and can't stop it. sjkfjkd
before he turns away, concentrating on regulating his breathing even as he desperately wants to break down and cry, focusing on a spot far in the distance to ensure his world doesn't get blurry why, why are you such a good writer. i thought the way you broke off in the parenthesis was a great add and just. why are you so good T_________T jafkjsg. the angst, it hurts so good. D: i really like the way 'to ensure his world doesn't get blurry' sounds.
both of them have their eyes shut, but they
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ajasjdklad definitely an epic comment it made me smile so many times i swear ♥
whaaat. what is there to be jealous of when you write so much better >:|
lmfao i totally went 'yay! sandcastles' to ;____; you're so silly and cute and adorable. jsdkfsldf.
am not a good writer pfft >:|
i didn't actually like that 'instead reminiscing...their minds' part. didn't like how i phrased it. oh oh you know every single time i read it my song ends exactly at the when he awakes, kangin is gone.
i thought it was super cliched xD and omfg you dork. i didnt know it repeated too actually because that song is on repeat on my itunes half the time. i think the song fit until that kangin is gone part but not after that :/
well appa is awesome 8D
ahsdaksd you write so much better than me who are you kidding pfft.
thanks so much for this awesome epic comment. i love people who analyze fictions or quote back. xD
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but it also made me really sad because it's such a broken story and you not capitalizing anything made it that much more... real, i guess is the word i'm looking for. the first part of paragraph 4, i think, is my favorite. the emotions are so clear and the whole story really made me fall into their world. i was listening to the song as well, btw. i adore it. ♥
but ugh. i just... i want to cry. and i was half crying at the sex as well as you were because it was so painstakingly beautiful.
i don't have anything else intelligent to say. this was really amazing sweetie. really, really amazing.
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i told kori i got into a panic attack because my net got cut before i had a chance to edit this fully and jsdklfjsdlf i re-read it and didn't feel a thing so i thought i ran on with sentences too long and heck i'm always starting each paragraphs with the same words!!! D:
i think though, i was crying at the sex because this was based on a heartbreaking rp and idk, it was... :/ but when i reread i doubted it would make anyone cry so. thanks a lot.
you don't need to have to say anything. your praise means a lot to me! :D
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i think about you a lot too. makes me worry how you're doing.
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i worry about how you're doing more. pfft.
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no reason to ♥ but lol, the length of kangteuk scares me. i usually don't read them but i want to but i'm going to go stalk some kanghyuk as backup XD /notweird.
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lots of reason to such as i care about you, you don't take care of yourself well enough, i miss you.
you don't have to read this if you don't want to~ it's fine :D
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so that gives me every reason to worry about you.
are you kidding me? o__o you must be crazy, truly; like hell i'm going to miss out on your writing just because i don't like the pairing.
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&&you already know how much i love the prelude right? it's perfect in so many ways D: /jealous.
he's tumbling right down the road of depression and heartbreak and fully aware of it, yet unable to do anything.
oh sobs. honestly, i didn't know what to quote because it's all so good and real and i totally went 'yay! sandcastles' to ;____; because gah, i hate that helpless feeling where you know things are going wrong and can't stop it. sjkfjkd
before he turns away, concentrating on regulating his breathing even as he desperately wants to break down and cry, focusing on a spot far in the distance to ensure his world doesn't get blurry
why, why are you such a good writer. i thought the way you broke off in the parenthesis was a great add and just. why are you so good T_________T jafkjsg. the angst, it hurts so good. D: i really like the way 'to ensure his world doesn't get blurry' sounds.
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whaaat. what is there to be jealous of when you write so much better >:|
lmfao i totally went 'yay! sandcastles' to ;____; you're so silly and cute and adorable. jsdkfsldf.
am not a good writer pfft >:|
i didn't actually like that 'instead reminiscing...their minds' part. didn't like how i phrased it. oh oh you know every single time i read it my song ends exactly at the when he awakes, kangin is gone.
i thought it was super cliched xD and omfg you dork. i didnt know it repeated too actually because that song is on repeat on my itunes half the time. i think the song fit until that kangin is gone part but not after that :/
well appa is awesome 8D
ahsdaksd you write so much better than me who are you kidding pfft.
thanks so much for this awesome epic comment. i love people who analyze fictions or quote back. xD
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