because it took me forever to get to reading this and just suddenly remembered... epic comment! maybe
&&you already know how much i love the prelude right? it's perfect in so many ways D: /jealous.
he's tumbling right down the road of depression and heartbreak and fully aware of it, yet unable to do anything. oh sobs. honestly, i didn't know what to quote because it's all so good and real and i totally went 'yay! sandcastles' to ;____; because gah, i hate that helpless feeling where you know things are going wrong and can't stop it. sjkfjkd
before he turns away, concentrating on regulating his breathing even as he desperately wants to break down and cry, focusing on a spot far in the distance to ensure his world doesn't get blurry why, why are you such a good writer. i thought the way you broke off in the parenthesis was a great add and just. why are you so good T_________T jafkjsg. the angst, it hurts so good. D: i really like the way 'to ensure his world doesn't get blurry' sounds.
both of them have their eyes shut, but they never get to sleep, instead reminiscing and going through every single time they had been together in their minds. eeteuk waits a long time for kangin's breathing to even out and turn into light snores, but it never does. in a way, this moved me more than their last time making love did, and i wanted to cry for both of them at that, so i don't know what that says but just the whole feel of this is just so heartbreaking and so fucking lovely at the same time. sjgkdg. and then the two lines after that paragraph; perfect way to transition it because of how simple and blunt 'when he awakes, kangin is gone' looks. /doesn't make sense.
as he walks home, he spots a couple sharing an umbrella, and without any warning at all, he's hit by a sudden pang of nostalgia, and his heart aches so much that he almost doubles over. something that only happens in music videos and still, you wrote it so well and it's like i could feel every bit and just. random comment; i'm listening the song on repeat and wondered why it was so fucking long before realizing that it repeated automatically and it just sits soso well. like how your writing fits soso well. with what? i'm not sure, but it does.
*"no you wouldn't. i'd hire someone to walk alongside you and keep you protected under an umbrella while making sure they gave you some really thick coat to keep you warm and i'd stalk you the whole way to make sure you were safe." ygshukjlmsgk. no words. saw ^, went to check ending notes, saw appa wrote it, and kind of grinned because. well. ♥
two years. two years and his heart still beats faster when he sees kangin's smile. why is the ending so bittersweet to me? i love it. i really really do. and i still don't think it's fair that you can write so much better than me but gah, i'm glad you do because this whole fic was beautiful, you're beautiful.
ajasjdklad definitely an epic comment it made me smile so many times i swear ♥
whaaat. what is there to be jealous of when you write so much better >:|
lmfao i totally went 'yay! sandcastles' to ;____; you're so silly and cute and adorable. jsdkfsldf.
am not a good writer pfft >:|
i didn't actually like that 'instead reminiscing...their minds' part. didn't like how i phrased it. oh oh you know every single time i read it my song ends exactly at the when he awakes, kangin is gone.
i thought it was super cliched xD and omfg you dork. i didnt know it repeated too actually because that song is on repeat on my itunes half the time. i think the song fit until that kangin is gone part but not after that :/
well appa is awesome 8D
ahsdaksd you write so much better than me who are you kidding pfft.
thanks so much for this awesome epic comment. i love people who analyze fictions or quote back. xD
&&you already know how much i love the prelude right? it's perfect in so many ways D: /jealous.
he's tumbling right down the road of depression and heartbreak and fully aware of it, yet unable to do anything.
oh sobs. honestly, i didn't know what to quote because it's all so good and real and i totally went 'yay! sandcastles' to ;____; because gah, i hate that helpless feeling where you know things are going wrong and can't stop it. sjkfjkd
before he turns away, concentrating on regulating his breathing even as he desperately wants to break down and cry, focusing on a spot far in the distance to ensure his world doesn't get blurry
why, why are you such a good writer. i thought the way you broke off in the parenthesis was a great add and just. why are you so good T_________T jafkjsg. the angst, it hurts so good. D: i really like the way 'to ensure his world doesn't get blurry' sounds.
both of them have their eyes shut, but they never get to sleep, instead reminiscing and going through every single time they had been together in their minds. eeteuk waits a long time for kangin's breathing to even out and turn into light snores, but it never does.
in a way, this moved me more than their last time making love did, and i wanted to cry for both of them at that, so i don't know what that says but just the whole feel of this is just so heartbreaking and so fucking lovely at the same time. sjgkdg. and then the two lines after that paragraph; perfect way to transition it because of how simple and blunt 'when he awakes, kangin is gone' looks. /doesn't make sense.
as he walks home, he spots a couple sharing an umbrella, and without any warning at all, he's hit by a sudden pang of nostalgia, and his heart aches so much that he almost doubles over.
something that only happens in music videos and still, you wrote it so well and it's like i could feel every bit and just. random comment; i'm listening the song on repeat and wondered why it was so fucking long before realizing that it repeated automatically and it just sits soso well. like how your writing fits soso well. with what? i'm not sure, but it does.
*"no you wouldn't. i'd hire someone to walk alongside you and keep you protected under an umbrella while making sure they gave you some really thick coat to keep you warm and i'd stalk you the whole way to make sure you were safe."
ygshukjlmsgk. no words. saw ^, went to check ending notes, saw appa wrote it, and kind of grinned because. well. ♥
two years. two years and his heart still beats faster when he sees kangin's smile.
why is the ending so bittersweet to me? i love it. i really really do. and i still don't think it's fair that you can write so much better than me but gah, i'm glad you do because this whole fic was beautiful, you're beautiful.
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whaaat. what is there to be jealous of when you write so much better >:|
lmfao i totally went 'yay! sandcastles' to ;____; you're so silly and cute and adorable. jsdkfsldf.
am not a good writer pfft >:|
i didn't actually like that 'instead reminiscing...their minds' part. didn't like how i phrased it. oh oh you know every single time i read it my song ends exactly at the when he awakes, kangin is gone.
i thought it was super cliched xD and omfg you dork. i didnt know it repeated too actually because that song is on repeat on my itunes half the time. i think the song fit until that kangin is gone part but not after that :/
well appa is awesome 8D
ahsdaksd you write so much better than me who are you kidding pfft.
thanks so much for this awesome epic comment. i love people who analyze fictions or quote back. xD
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