Circuit 109

[proto_typing]

"I always wanted a real brother relationship with you," the Blue Bomber said in that dweeby and kinda pathetic way of his, but hey, you had to give him points for trying. "Why won't you come back to the good side?"

"I've got a better idea," his much cooler older brother replied. "Why don't you join the bad side

Comments

[lady_wandering]

That's... an interesting story. Did you write it?

[proto_typing]

Nah, I read it in a fortune cookie. C'mon, what kind of stupid question is that?

[lady_wandering]

Well, people have been known to recite the works of others on the Network.

[proto_typing]

Oh, yeah? What, did you think I was ripping off Shakespeare or something?

[lady_wandering]

No, the prose was too amateurish.

[proto_typing]

Gee, everyone's a critic.

[lady_wandering]

Well, I didn't say it was bad necessarily, just lacking... polish.

[proto_typing]

It's lacking German, too, but only 'cause I didn't feel like writing out Doc's accent.

[lady_wandering]

Ah. Do you have plans to revise your work?

[proto_typing]

Why should I? I think it's great just the way it is.

[lady_wandering]

Well, don't most writers revise their works to some extent?

[proto_typing]

So who says I'm most writers? Like I said, it's already a masterpiece.