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fic: A Sentimental Mind (4/4)

Feb 02, 2012 00:36

( Getting out of his troubles turns out to be much more difficult than he’d originally thought it would be. )

rating: pg-13, pairing: hayato/ryu, genre: general, genre: romance, format: one-shot, genre: angst

Comments 66

pinkeuphoria1 February 1 2012, 22:38:40 UTC

Spammerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

prologuesized February 1 2012, 22:39:20 UTC

I seeeeeeeeeeee.

pinkeuphoria1 February 1 2012, 22:39:44 UTC

I still want moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

prologuesized February 1 2012, 22:42:31 UTC

...What do you mean more :|

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wintersdancer February 1 2012, 23:36:17 UTC

Why so long? D: I need to sleep, I'm sick D:

I'll be back tomorrow morning .-.

prologuesized February 1 2012, 23:37:27 UTC

Get some sleep ♥ It's long because lately I've had trouble writing short things .____.

wintersdancer February 3 2012, 13:58:27 UTC

So ok, clearly it took me longer than expected to read this but WHOA. I LOVE YOUR HAYARYU FICS SO MUCH ;_; Poor Ryu.

For some reason I don't know, I really loved the part about the hair dye. I don't even know why ;_; It's like there was this sign of "Ryu's making of in progress": I don't know how to explain. Can I blame my nonsense to my health? xD It would make things easier.

And I loved Hayato. Split personality much? Anyway, I loved him.
And I hated Ryu's father, but that shouldn't come as a surprise.

♥

prologuesized February 3 2012, 15:54:40 UTC

The hair dye part was... random XDD I'm glad you liked it ♥ And you, go get tea and rest :(((((

Hayato is sooo undecisive. And awkward. Seriously ♥

Ryu's father makes a good villain XDD

Thanks for reading again ♥

dream_air February 2 2012, 00:38:01 UTC

WOW LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

prologuesized February 2 2012, 07:13:46 UTC

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it! :D

pinkporca February 2 2012, 00:39:24 UTC

This was incredibly good. I loved it. Thank you for writing it and sharing.

prologuesized February 2 2012, 07:14:07 UTC

Thank you for reading, I'm happy you found it worthwhile ♥

aeris_svitkona February 2 2012, 01:29:10 UTC

Grrrr HayaRyu.....<3

I don't think the way you wrote Ryu was weak at all btw, in fact, aside from his inner self pity, he was pretty badass! I especially liked how he stood up to his father; I really hated him >_<

This is one of my fav pairings, so it's hard to find something I don't like about it. Hayato's outbursts after he says something embarrassingly sweet was really hilarious, I kept giggling, lol

Thanks for sharing! ^_^

prologuesized February 2 2012, 07:15:36 UTC

Good *lets out a relieved sigh* I was really concerned because I couldn't tell. Giving someone emotions and weaknesses can sort of... take over the fic and make the character look completely off.

HayaRyu is amazing ♥ There can never be too much of it.

Thanks for reading~ :D