Oh, I like this a lot, loving Michael's parts in particular (the thing with the hookers), very haunting ending. Great job, I really liked the contrasts.
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When Theodore tasted the outside air for the first time in 2 and a half years, he felt something break inside of him. Something that was so beautiful that he was moved to sob.
And my user dictionary says that Abruzzi isn't an actual word and suggests 'Fuzziness'. I laughed.
Hm? Really? My dictionary on WordPerfect recognizes Abruzzi. It's actually the plural demonination of Abruzzo in Italy back when it had been administered as Closer Abruzzo and Farther Abruzzo by the Bourbons.
And it amuses me that the title of this (Full Circle) is also the title of one of Blonde From Fargo's songs (BFF is a band that Peter Stormare is in).
Nice job though :D I really liked this. Especially these lines:
Sweet gasps of agony were his Mozart, sobs of pain were his instruments of which he created a cacophonic orchestra of tears, blood and torn flesh. (bonus points for using one of my favorite words, "cacophony" :D)
"Because pain comes full circle, Pretty. It comes full circle. We were destined to meet. You were destined to betray me in that barn house...and I was destined to kill you."
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When Theodore tasted the outside air for the first time in 2 and a half years, he felt something break inside of him. Something that was so beautiful that he was moved to sob.
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Yeah i am glad you liked it. Everyone portrays him as the pretty nagelical ice queen, i figured he had to do SOMETHING dirty in his life.
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Hm? Really? My dictionary on WordPerfect recognizes Abruzzi. It's actually the plural demonination of Abruzzo in Italy back when it had been administered as Closer Abruzzo and Farther Abruzzo by the Bourbons.
And it amuses me that the title of this (Full Circle) is also the title of one of Blonde From Fargo's songs (BFF is a band that Peter Stormare is in).
Nice job though :D I really liked this. Especially these lines:
Sweet gasps of agony were his Mozart, sobs of pain were his instruments of which he created a cacophonic orchestra of tears, blood and torn flesh. (bonus points for using one of my favorite words, "cacophony" :D)
"Because pain comes full circle, Pretty. It comes full circle. We were destined to meet. You were destined to betray me in that barn house...and I was destined to kill you."
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Oh really? Thats awesome! I should go and get some of his stuff, I've never heard his band before.
I'm super stoked you and Thelana liked this.
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