PoT Kissage: Inui/Kaidoh

[prillalar]

Day three of the Week of Boy Kissage and my first Prince of Tennis fic.

Cool-Down
InuKai, PG13, 950 words.
Kissing.

Comments

[indirect]

Eeeee! This is so so so nice! :happy happy: If this is your first try, then I can't wait to see what you come up with later! <3

[prillalar]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[branchandroot]

*grinning* I liked that. I think you've got the naive aspects of Kaidou matched up nicely with his more aggressive/determined side. And Inui is great; straightforward in a manipulative sort of way, and, of course, he would notice the elevated pulse.

[prillalar]

Glad to hear it. :) It always takes a while to get comfortable with the characters in a new fandom, so it's good to hear you think they're pretty much in character. I think Inui is just teasing with the elevated pulse thing, but who can tell for sure with him? *g*

[prillalar]

Yay! I'm glad you liked it. :) These two are a lot of fun. I'll have to think of something more unusual they can get up to later on.

[lifeinwords]

I really enjoyed this. Knowing only the tiniest teeniest bit about this fandom, I can't say much for your characterization, but I'm fascinated by the people you've shown me here. It's very soft, detailed and intense. Thanks for sharing!

[prillalar]

I'm glad you liked it, even without knowing the characters. :) These two have, IMO, a very complex relationship but I didn't really do more than touch the surface of that.

[zero_sleep]

Found it! And liked immensly I must say, especially the mention that Kaidoh normally uses downtime to visualize, and that he has no reason to doubt what Inui tells him. So very Kaidoh. And Inui still taking data. *laughs* Oh yes, perfect.

[prillalar]

Thank you! It's just a bit of fluff, but I thought it would be good to start out with as I get a feel for these two.