Meme time!

Mar 17, 2010 04:34

So. Over at azalee_calypso's journal there was this meme. I forgot I asked for a drabble, but I totally did (and it was ~*wonderful*~ because there is not enough Shiki/Neku) and anyway, the rules are that the first ten to comment get a free drabble. The price~? You're supposed to do the meme back. And, I'm not going to like, hunt you down to get my drabble's ( Read more... )

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prettypriestess March 23 2010, 15:59:29 UTC
Not doing the meme? That kills a bit of my soul. I hope you are happy with yourself. (I might be crying on the inside, depending on whether or not you change your mind. >.>)

...On the other hand, there is not enough Sasuke/time-skip. (Or Naruto/time-skip, for that matter.)

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The first year of traveling from base to base with Orochimaru, Sasuke wonders if Naruto can find him. There are no reports of other bases being attacked by a loud blond wearing bright fucking orange, but he knows that Naruto can do stealth when he really needs to. Sasuke doesn't stop to call himself important enough to warrant that kind of dedication from his frie--former friend, it just happens. Sasuke is a teammate and Naruto will try to rescue him. That is all.

His training really picks up after the one-year anniversary of joining Orochimaru rolls around and he has still not seen or heard anything about Naruto coming to his rescue.

Sasuke buries himself in training. Training now, training later. Training before breakfast, after lunch, all night after Orochimaru warns him again not to strain his body with that special tongue-flick/hiss thing he does every time he mentions Sasuke's body.

Sasuke thinks he can almost change the shape of Chidori. That would be useful. Rasengan was just a ball. Not that Sasuke cared or anything.

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azalee_calypso March 23 2010, 16:58:00 UTC
Orochimaru warns him again not to strain his body with that special tongue-flick/hiss thing he does every time he mentions Sasuke's body
Much as I love Orocchan and all his fucking weird creepiness, this was just... disturbing details. Love it, congratulations 8D

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prettypriestess March 23 2010, 17:56:55 UTC
XD Awesome. I was just going for crack, but if it genuinely creeped you out, I think I win.

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syrraki March 23 2010, 20:35:33 UTC
:DDDDDDD You are right, there is just enough Time-skip fic!
THANK YOUUUUUUUU :D totally hit the spot. Urg. Orochimaru... *shudders* Love the last line, btw xDD Very Sasuke.

And your fic is. well. it's stalled a bit. BUT i will pick it up again. I just got a bi carried away with Seldom recently. Why do I find it so much easier to work alternative universe? It's a mystery. But anyway! IT'S IN EXISTENCE, AT LEAST!/

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prettypriestess March 24 2010, 02:44:52 UTC
XD VICTORY! I creeped you out, too~! <3

THAT'S OKAY. <333 If it's late, that's called "prolonging the holiday." (My birthday is most definitely a holiday.)

AU is much easier for me, as well. D: I totally understand.

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aurrai March 27 2010, 03:21:13 UTC
I don’t even know where to begin. Every word in every sentence of this drabble meant something. Sasuke is just the type of character you’ve described here: he likes Naruto but he won’t change the way he thinks of him as a rival. Like feeling proud that he can manipulate chidori’s form-he doesn’t take pride in himself; he’s only proud he can do it because Naruto can’t. It’s always about Naruto.

WHY DON’T YOU WRITE LONGER THINGS?
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prettypriestess March 27 2010, 03:33:18 UTC
KEEP STOKING THE EGO, BB. A LITTLE HARDER.

Unlike some of the others where I feel more modest about my abilities, I am very proud of this drabble, so I'm glad that you (and underhandy and aza) all like it so much. <3

LONGER THINGS REQUIRE A LONGER ATTENTION SPAN. WHICH I DO NOT POSSESS. (If I make an "OOOH SHINY" joke I would feel cliche, but it is sadly true. HEY, POKEYMANS...)

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