Meme time!

Mar 17, 2010 04:34

So. Over at azalee_calypso's journal there was this meme. I forgot I asked for a drabble, but I totally did (and it was ~*wonderful*~ because there is not enough Shiki/Neku) and anyway, the rules are that the first ten to comment get a free drabble. The price~? You're supposed to do the meme back. And, I'm not going to like, hunt you down to get my drabble's ( Read more... )

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1angelette March 17 2010, 10:14:12 UTC
TWEWY. Shiki/Neku. A point where they both like each other very much, but aren't really sure how to get the ball rolling. Scheduled meeting between the six friends at Shiki's house while her parents aren't home... but it turns out that nobody else can make it.

bonus if Joshua arranges it with his composer powers and secretly watches

Oh, Christ, this isn't much of a drabble-type prompt is it. Let me try again...

Naruto. Sakura/Ino/Hina. Sandbox.

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prettypriestess March 23 2010, 15:45:29 UTC
Totally late because I want to get these done in order and Sakura/Ino/Hinata is harder than it sounds. Rather than, y'know, get original and creative with the prompt "sandbox," I am taking it literally. As in, something sand-related. (Although I kind of want to do the Shiki/Neku like burning, it is difficult to fit that into 100 words, and if I did, I fear it would not satisfy me.) This was way harder than it looks. XD ( ... )

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1angelette March 23 2010, 21:33:01 UTC
ffffff YES

I'm glad you took it literally; was expecting them being cute little kids in a sandbox... but this is even better. :D :D

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prettypriestess March 24 2010, 03:14:51 UTC
XD I was going to try that instead, but I just couldn't get it started in my head. Then I thought of beaches and sunscreen and Kiba totally getting a nosebleed for Hinata going topless for sunscreen...

AND I'M VERY GLAD YOU LIKE IT. <3333

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syrraki March 17 2010, 14:08:08 UTC
Humm. I'm kinda feeling a Sasuke during the time skip piece. If you're up to it XD.

But I'm not gonna do this meme XD Sorry! Well./ Maybe.

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prettypriestess March 23 2010, 15:59:29 UTC
Not doing the meme? That kills a bit of my soul. I hope you are happy with yourself. (I might be crying on the inside, depending on whether or not you change your mind. >.>)

...On the other hand, there is not enough Sasuke/time-skip. (Or Naruto/time-skip, for that matter.)

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The first year of traveling from base to base with Orochimaru, Sasuke wonders if Naruto can find him. There are no reports of other bases being attacked by a loud blond wearing bright fucking orange, but he knows that Naruto can do stealth when he really needs to. Sasuke doesn't stop to call himself important enough to warrant that kind of dedication from his frie--former friend, it just happens. Sasuke is a teammate and Naruto will try to rescue him. That is all ( ... )

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azalee_calypso March 23 2010, 16:58:00 UTC
Orochimaru warns him again not to strain his body with that special tongue-flick/hiss thing he does every time he mentions Sasuke's body
Much as I love Orocchan and all his fucking weird creepiness, this was just... disturbing details. Love it, congratulations 8D

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prettypriestess March 23 2010, 17:56:55 UTC
XD Awesome. I was just going for crack, but if it genuinely creeped you out, I think I win.

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Oops. azalee_calypso March 19 2010, 11:21:46 UTC
oh my god would you believe that the fact i didn't see this meme pop up again in my flist is how i realized i had never actually gotten around to friending you back.
WHAT THE HELL, ME.
there goes MY internet honor. as well as, you know, REQUESTING what you did at the gs meme 08D which i'm QUITE HAPPY i did tkvm.
so anyway that's why you never had me comment on your entries and why i'm going to catch up on that right now.

As for the meme, hmmmmmmmmmm... oh, oh, can I request DNAngel fluff back from you ? ♥ Satoshi/Daisuke, on a date, AWKWARD ? :D
If not... just let me think of a cracky GS pairing.
OH I KNOW
Wanna try Alex/Saturos ? ♥ because the kink meme convinced me it was a very very good idea

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Re: Oops. prettypriestess March 23 2010, 16:18:31 UTC
If it makes you feel any better, I DIDN'T NOTICE IT WAS ONE-WAY, EITHER. /friendshipfail.

B-but, I want to write both, and that would be unfair to other people in the meme! DDDD: DAMN, WHY YOU GOTTA BE SO COOL, AZA?

A-alright, Sato/Dai and I'll post the Alex/Saturos at a later time, hopefully while looking less suspicious. >.>

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Satoshi makes reservations at the kind of place Daisuke's mother sends him to for heists. There is, in fact, a valuable centerpiece on the central table that he recalls his mother mentioning.

Daisuke pretends he doesn't see the notice carefully attached. He reflects that denial works better when there is not a genuine second voice in his head reminding him about the heist his mother never mentioned in the first place.

"S-so," Daisuke says when they sit down.

"The notice," Satoshi agrees.

"I can skip it if you want," Daisuke offers. Dark flails in his head. He can hear his mother lecturing him already on being the first in centuries of Niwa to break Dark's perfect record. And for a Hikari, no less ( ... )

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Re: Oops. azalee_calypso March 23 2010, 16:48:50 UTC
8D Thanks, I try. But if it makes you feel better, by some freaky coincidence I was just jotting down your Felix/Sheba request during class, so uh, granting two requests is fair if it's equivalent exchange ? ;D
cause i mean. i seriously didnt actually expect you to do saturos/alex. BUT IT WOULD BE MORE THAN AMAZING. *_*

As for the drabble - omg the beginning paragraph with Daisuke's kleptomania matter-of-factly showing through just... made me laugh.
And then I laughed more. Definitely cute and fluffy and DEFINITELY DNAngel-like (of COURSE Emiko wouldn't let something like a date justify not stealing something !)
Satoshi's deadpan-ness is cute too though <3 Thanks a lot ! x3

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Re: Oops. prettypriestess March 23 2010, 16:53:51 UTC
YESSSS. That makes it totally okay!
Well, I had this idea the other day, and the reason I haven't written it is because I didn't have a ship to attach it to, but if I take your Saturos/Alex and run with it, I have somewhere to take this!

I figure Emiko probably waited for the date to get that thing. Daisuke was probably wondering why she didn't protest him going with Satoshi this time. She is devious.

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aurrai March 27 2010, 03:29:05 UTC
Naruto. NaruSasuNaru + Sakura. Sasuke's come back, blahblahblah redeemed blahblah hookedupwithNaruto yaddayadda.

Sakura's pissed off that Naruto and Sasuke never act like the couple she wants to see them act like.

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prettypriestess March 27 2010, 22:56:51 UTC
S-so, it's not six days' worth of work, but this was still immensely fun to write. (And if you don't like it, I can totally try again. I usually try again with drabbles anyway. See also: any request azalee has ever made. XD)

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Sasuke and Naruto pay for their ramen separately. Beside them, Sakura appears to have some kind of fit.

"THE ENDS OF THE EARTH. HE WENT TO THE ENDS OF THE EARTH FOR YOU, AND YOU CAN'T EVEN PAY FOR HIS MEAL?" she demands.

Sasuke shrugs. "He has money."

Naruto opens his mouth to say something, but Sakura cuts him off. "IT'S NOT THE MONEY." She takes a deep breath, but her volume only decreases by a small amount. "You don't hold hands when you walk down the street. You don't go on romantic dates. You don't buy each other chocolates or flowers--"

"He doesn't like sweets," Naruto says as Sasuke replies, "Do I look like a girl to you?"

Sakura ignores them, "--I've never seen either of you publicly displaying your affection. IT'S LIKE YOU'RE NOT EVEN A REAL COUPLE ( ... )

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aurrai March 28 2010, 00:08:42 UTC
Just a first note before the review: like thank god we got to know each other before we knew about each other’s writing. I can feel more like a real friend than someone who’s latched onto you for your writing skills-because they’re so good and I don’t have to feel like you’re just another Writer to me and I’m just another Fan to you.

I think this is the fourth time I’m reading it before even thinking of trying to formulate a review. This was exactly what I had hoped to receive when I made the request. Sakura caring too much, trying to fix what’s not broken and Sasuke and Naruto bringing their usual ‘derr, if we’ve never done that stuff before why would we start now?’ logic into it.

Oh, I adore how you end scenes. You do it every time and it just kills me with envy. This drabbled was perfect so don’t you even think about writing another. Thank you so, so much ♥

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prettypriestess March 28 2010, 00:47:34 UTC
I love the idea of having a friend who also happens to be in the same fandom, too~! It's nice having someone I've talked to comment things, rather than just random strangers. Not that there's anythign wrong with strangers commenting either, just. It's not the same. D: (You know, if you keep saying things like that about my writing, my ego is going to, like, EXPLODE. It will be visible all over the world. Even where you live.)

Sasuke/Naruto logic makes COMPLETE SENSE, y'know, if you're inhumanly strong and just as likely to punch your Significant Other in the face as kiss him. >.> Sakura's a bit harder to write sometimes because she's not BATSHIT FUCKING INSANE.

:D That makes me very happy inside. (I have this mental image of Sakura trying not to fall over, foaming at the mouth, while Inner!Sakura screams "FUCK YEAH!" and passes out from a massive nosebleed.)

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prettypriestess March 29 2010, 04:57:29 UTC
Thank you!

I AGREE. There needs to be a whole... place where all the fic-writers can come together for timeskip fic! (Actually, just for people to list links to timeskip fic would be fine. I've only ever seen a bit, myself.)

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syrraki March 29 2010, 09:56:49 UTC
Oh I WOULD LOVE THAT. I love all timeskip fic. EVEN CREEPY OROSASU ONES.

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prettypriestess March 29 2010, 14:16:25 UTC
CREEPY OROSASU ONES ARE THE BEST KIND ALSO AWESOME. THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE JIRAIYA FIC, TOO, I AM THINKING.

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