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Oct 12, 2008 22:09

Alright. I told Kyouya I'd write him a poem about biting.

So.

I did.

...Yeah, I really have no idea, either.

-Soft Bite-

Soft flesh yet firm
Try to defend
'Gainst teeth so sharp
That rip and rend

Pearl white edges
Pierce down and through
They draw out blood
That once was blue

A few more bites
A final blow
Whose marks they are
You'll never

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bitendency October 13 2008, 02:14:42 UTC
It rhymes.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:18:28 UTC
It does.

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bitendency October 13 2008, 02:19:22 UTC
Poems were meant to rhyme.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:22:06 UTC
Traditionally, yes.

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automailmaker October 13 2008, 02:23:18 UTC
Wow. That made my skin crawl.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:27:13 UTC
Is that good or bad?

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automailmaker October 13 2008, 02:30:26 UTC
Good. I gave you a thumb, didn't I? It was a powerful poem. But I'm not really one for writing, I do enjoy reading them.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:32:10 UTC
I was just making sure. There could be people out there none too keen on that skin crawling sensation.

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curry_thief October 13 2008, 02:51:28 UTC
Not bad.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:53:16 UTC
Why, thanks.

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curry_thief October 13 2008, 02:59:29 UTC
So by "Kyouya" do you mean that Hibari kid?

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 03:00:31 UTC
That's be the one, yes.

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upyourscolonel October 13 2008, 03:34:03 UTC
I don't even know.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 03:38:36 UTC
Yeah, me either.

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upyourscolonel October 13 2008, 03:41:00 UTC
That is so creepy.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 03:43:41 UTC
...A bit, yeah.

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