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Oct 12, 2008 22:09

Alright. I told Kyouya I'd write him a poem about biting.

So.

I did.

...Yeah, I really have no idea, either.

-Soft Bite-

Soft flesh yet firm
Try to defend
'Gainst teeth so sharp
That rip and rend

Pearl white edges
Pierce down and through
They draw out blood
That once was blue

A few more bites
A final blow
Whose marks they are
You'll never

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bitendency October 13 2008, 02:14:42 UTC
It rhymes.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:18:28 UTC
It does.

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bitendency October 13 2008, 02:19:22 UTC
Poems were meant to rhyme.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:22:06 UTC
Traditionally, yes.

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bitendency October 13 2008, 02:40:32 UTC
I'm debating over whether you deserve a thumb or not.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:41:05 UTC
Let the icons persuade you.

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bitendency October 13 2008, 02:51:31 UTC
Hm.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 02:53:32 UTC
bitendency October 13 2008, 03:03:44 UTC
Fine.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 03:08:12 UTC
That's the spirit.

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bitendency October 13 2008, 03:10:18 UTC
Tch.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 03:17:46 UTC
It's like pulling...well. Teeth.

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bitendency October 13 2008, 03:19:35 UTC
Is that another metaphor?

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 03:21:18 UTC
Yes, yes it is.

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bitendency October 13 2008, 03:24:14 UTC
You are prohibited from making any more metaphors.

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prettybeachboy October 13 2008, 03:25:23 UTC
How about similes?

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