3554: Mudblood - kathrynMerteuil0918
It's tme for Tropes Sue Week either. I'm looking for help finding entries for said week. Accepting entries for the Thirteenth Annual Pottersues Contest.
After taking a much needed break here is the last day of Pottersues. Today we have an older piece which is over four years old. Make that five at least as I realized I was looking at the last date the story was updated.
Today's link of the day is
TITLE: Mudblood
PERPETRATOR: kathrynMerteuil0918
SUE-O-METER: awful
COVER/BANNER ART: I don't recognize the writer's avatar.
SUMMARY:”harry and ron are using hermione but hermione turns the tables on them she is evil daughter of voldemort”
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger
SPECIES: Voldemort's Daughter
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: In the second chapter she shows Draco she has a dark mark proving she's a Death Eater.
POSSESSIONS:
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter have Ron and Harry bash Hermione for making the best grades and they act like this isn't fair to everybody else. Both start calling her Mudblood despite the fact they never would use said word and Hermione calls them a “filthy pureblood” and a “filty half-blood” in return. (Suethor - these words don't have the same effect.) The Slytherin's are hanging onto every single word. She then becomes friends with Draco in the second chapter and he's calling her by her first name. Third chapter has Draco ask if she'll be his girlfriend and she says yes. Forth chapter is a sex scene because becoming girlfriend and boyfriend means you instantly start having sex with each other. (o.0) They're then late to Snape's class. I'm not sure if he's giving points or taking them, but the points for Gryffindor are 30 and Slytherin are 50 points. Sixth chapter they leave Hogwarts via the carriages and go to “borgin a& burkes” and Hermione asks if he wants to meet her father. The last chapter is chapter seven. Draco goes to meet Voldemort and Snape is revealed to be a triple agent, and Hermione plans on using Ginny against Harry.
ORIGIN: I've not seen one like this for awhile now.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: They're lacking the maturity the canon characters are known to have.
NOTES: I'm left wondering if the writer was old enough to be on the site when they started posting stories. The reviews are pretty bad to. There is a wide range from the way a person should leave critique and ones calling the writer a retard which is uncalled for. Particulary since I suspect many of the issues aren't because the writer's first language isn't English, or they're special need. It looks more like they weren't as I said old enough to have an account.
SAMPLE:
Harry:Ron i'm tired of being friends with granger and the other gryffindors are also tired of her always getting good grades and being a-know-it-all I can't stand her
Ron:harry I feel the same way too we should definitely go talk to her and tell her how we feel
Harry:yeah let's go
They both got out of their common room and wet to find hermione then they found her in the great hall she was about to go to class when she hears someone calling her name she didn't notice the slytherins passed by then harry breaks the silence
Harry:Granger, all the gryffindors and I are tired of you always getting good grades and for being a-miss-know-it-all. Actually me and ron don't want to to be friends with the likes of you we only wanted to be your friends so you can help us study and no way we could be friends with a mudblood like yourself
Ron:That's right what harry just said no way we don't wanna be your friend you filthy mudblood
All The Slytherins Gasp
Hermione:So let me get this straight you only wanted me to help you study and do your work when you don't
Harry and Ron in unison:that's right
Hermione:well you wanna know what I think (laughs)you're all bloody idiots ittle little baby potter and you weasley don't ever call me mudbood you filthy pureblood and of course let's not forget the filthy half-blood potter
Harry and Ron Together:what
the slytherins gasp and draco just stood there listening
After taking a much needed break here is the last day of Pottersues. Today we have an older piece which is over four years old. Make that five at least as I realized I was looking at the last date the story was updated.
Today's link of the day is
TITLE: Mudblood
PERPETRATOR: kathrynMerteuil0918
SUE-O-METER: awful
COVER/BANNER ART: I don't recognize the writer's avatar.
SUMMARY:”harry and ron are using hermione but hermione turns the tables on them she is evil daughter of voldemort”
FULL NAME: Hermione Granger
SPECIES: Voldemort's Daughter
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: In the second chapter she shows Draco she has a dark mark proving she's a Death Eater.
POSSESSIONS:
CONNECTION TO CANON: The first chapter have Ron and Harry bash Hermione for making the best grades and they act like this isn't fair to everybody else. Both start calling her Mudblood despite the fact they never would use said word and Hermione calls them a “filthy pureblood” and a “filty half-blood” in return. (Suethor - these words don't have the same effect.) The Slytherin's are hanging onto every single word. She then becomes friends with Draco in the second chapter and he's calling her by her first name. Third chapter has Draco ask if she'll be his girlfriend and she says yes. Forth chapter is a sex scene because becoming girlfriend and boyfriend means you instantly start having sex with each other. (o.0) They're then late to Snape's class. I'm not sure if he's giving points or taking them, but the points for Gryffindor are 30 and Slytherin are 50 points. Sixth chapter they leave Hogwarts via the carriages and go to “borgin a& burkes” and Hermione asks if he wants to meet her father. The last chapter is chapter seven. Draco goes to meet Voldemort and Snape is revealed to be a triple agent, and Hermione plans on using Ginny against Harry.
ORIGIN: I've not seen one like this for awhile now.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: They're lacking the maturity the canon characters are known to have.
NOTES: I'm left wondering if the writer was old enough to be on the site when they started posting stories. The reviews are pretty bad to. There is a wide range from the way a person should leave critique and ones calling the writer a retard which is uncalled for. Particulary since I suspect many of the issues aren't because the writer's first language isn't English, or they're special need. It looks more like they weren't as I said old enough to have an account.
SAMPLE:
Harry:Ron i'm tired of being friends with granger and the other gryffindors are also tired of her always getting good grades and being a-know-it-all I can't stand her
Ron:harry I feel the same way too we should definitely go talk to her and tell her how we feel
Harry:yeah let's go
They both got out of their common room and wet to find hermione then they found her in the great hall she was about to go to class when she hears someone calling her name she didn't notice the slytherins passed by then harry breaks the silence
Harry:Granger, all the gryffindors and I are tired of you always getting good grades and for being a-miss-know-it-all. Actually me and ron don't want to to be friends with the likes of you we only wanted to be your friends so you can help us study and no way we could be friends with a mudblood like yourself
Ron:That's right what harry just said no way we don't wanna be your friend you filthy mudblood
All The Slytherins Gasp
Hermione:So let me get this straight you only wanted me to help you study and do your work when you don't
Harry and Ron in unison:that's right
Hermione:well you wanna know what I think (laughs)you're all bloody idiots ittle little baby potter and you weasley don't ever call me mudbood you filthy pureblood and of course let's not forget the filthy half-blood potter
Harry and Ron Together:what
the slytherins gasp and draco just stood there listening