3449: Phantoms at Hogwarts - Danny and Dani "Danielle" Fenton
Don't forget about Tropes Sue Week either. I'm looking for help finding entries for said week. I'm also looking for some feedback on this.
TITLE: Phantoms at Hogwarts
PERPETRATOR: Poison Thread
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: None
SUMMARY:”Danny and Dani are sent to Hogwarts to learn more of their powers. The age is turned to a 11 year old but keep they're powers. They are to be picked up with Harry Potter. Let's see how this turns out. Dani and Danny are twins in this fanfic. Don't like don't read. (Account owners niece. Enjoy v ) DISCONTINUED!”
FULL NAME: Danny and Dani “Danielle” Fenton
SPECIES: twins
HAIR: n/a
EYES: “electric blue” eyes for Harry, “beautiful brown” for Hermione
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The two pretty much tag along with Hagrid. They then meet Hermione when she's trying to free an owl from the emporium. (This is despite the sign that says DO NOT TOUCH WITHOUT ADULT SUPERVISION.” Second chapter is an author's note.
ORIGIN: “At the time we were 11. Though we were actually 14. Clockwork made it so we were 11 so we could protect the kid named Harry and learn more about our powers.”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: They're guardians meant to protect Harry.
NOTES: I am under the impression the actual writer isn't old enough to have an account on the site and the aunt is trying to help them get around the age restriction by claiming the account is their account. Can the aunt though really claim this when all four stories post to the account are written by the niece and only one of the stories is co-written by the two? A couple of their stories contain author's notes as individual chapters, and one of their stories contains profiles for their six OCs.
SAMPLE:
I woke up in an abandoned, or what I thought was an abandoned house. What..? I thought then memories hit me like a brick. We were here to be picked up by a man named Hagrid while he'd also be picking up a boy named Harry. "Danny! Danny! Wake up!" I yell whispered.
At that time we were 11. Though we were actually 14. Clockwork made it so we were 11 so we could protect the kid named Harry and learn more about our powers.
"I'm up! I'm up." He said at the same volume. That's when people came in. We phased through the stairs to find a hollow space. We decided to stay there.
"Ah. Finally away from civilization where letters can't find us." There were two boys, one man, and an old woman. The one that spoke had gray hair, dirt brown eyes, and was fat. One of the boys was wider than the average child, he had brown hair, and light blue eyes. The smaller boy was slender, he had black hair, and electric blue eyes that were dull and sad. The woman had black-gray hair, light blue eyes, was wrinkly, and slender. "Boy." The slender boy perked up at this. "You will sleep down here on the floor." He said in a harsh tone. "Dudley you sleep on the couch." He said in a softer tone. "And Petunia and I will sleep on the bed." They all went to the respective sleeping places.
When we thought everyone was asleep I asked in a whisper, "Danny, do you think the one they call 'boy' is Harry?"
TITLE: Phantoms at Hogwarts
PERPETRATOR: Poison Thread
SUE-O-METER:
(awful)
COVER/BANNER ART: None
SUMMARY:”Danny and Dani are sent to Hogwarts to learn more of their powers. The age is turned to a 11 year old but keep they're powers. They are to be picked up with Harry Potter. Let's see how this turns out. Dani and Danny are twins in this fanfic. Don't like don't read. (Account owners niece. Enjoy v ) DISCONTINUED!”
FULL NAME: Danny and Dani “Danielle” Fenton
SPECIES: twins
HAIR: n/a
EYES: “electric blue” eyes for Harry, “beautiful brown” for Hermione
MARKINGS: n/a
POSSESSIONS: n/a
CONNECTION TO CANON: The two pretty much tag along with Hagrid. They then meet Hermione when she's trying to free an owl from the emporium. (This is despite the sign that says DO NOT TOUCH WITHOUT ADULT SUPERVISION.” Second chapter is an author's note.
ORIGIN: “At the time we were 11. Though we were actually 14. Clockwork made it so we were 11 so we could protect the kid named Harry and learn more about our powers.”
SPECIAL ABILITIES: They're guardians meant to protect Harry.
NOTES: I am under the impression the actual writer isn't old enough to have an account on the site and the aunt is trying to help them get around the age restriction by claiming the account is their account. Can the aunt though really claim this when all four stories post to the account are written by the niece and only one of the stories is co-written by the two? A couple of their stories contain author's notes as individual chapters, and one of their stories contains profiles for their six OCs.
SAMPLE:
I woke up in an abandoned, or what I thought was an abandoned house. What..? I thought then memories hit me like a brick. We were here to be picked up by a man named Hagrid while he'd also be picking up a boy named Harry. "Danny! Danny! Wake up!" I yell whispered.
At that time we were 11. Though we were actually 14. Clockwork made it so we were 11 so we could protect the kid named Harry and learn more about our powers.
"I'm up! I'm up." He said at the same volume. That's when people came in. We phased through the stairs to find a hollow space. We decided to stay there.
"Ah. Finally away from civilization where letters can't find us." There were two boys, one man, and an old woman. The one that spoke had gray hair, dirt brown eyes, and was fat. One of the boys was wider than the average child, he had brown hair, and light blue eyes. The smaller boy was slender, he had black hair, and electric blue eyes that were dull and sad. The woman had black-gray hair, light blue eyes, was wrinkly, and slender. "Boy." The slender boy perked up at this. "You will sleep down here on the floor." He said in a harsh tone. "Dudley you sleep on the couch." He said in a softer tone. "And Petunia and I will sleep on the bed." They all went to the respective sleeping places.
When we thought everyone was asleep I asked in a whisper, "Danny, do you think the one they call 'boy' is Harry?"