3435: Kissed by a Rose - Prequel - Rose Dursley
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Here is the next “Don't Like, Don't Read” day.
TITLE: Kissed by a Rose Prequel
PERPETRATOR: firelily18
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: The picture is of a rose.
SUMMARY:”Rose Dursley, the only child of Mr. and Mrs. Dursley, isn't as normal as anyone suspects her to be. She holds many secrets, one of which is that she's in love with her cousin Harry Potter and another that is just too dangerous to even talk about. Fem!Dudley. WARNING: INCEST, MINORS AND NON CON! DON'T LIKE, DON'T READ! Fem! Dudley.”
FULL NAME: Rose Dursley
SPECIES: She is a female version of Dudley.
HAIR: “Her waist length golden blonde hair was freely let loose behind her back...”
EYES:
MARKINGS: “Harry was transfixed by Rose's beauty. She looked completely different from the nervous wrek the last time he saw her at the dragon task.” “She was, without a doubt, the most gourgeous creature Harry had ever laid eyes on.”
POSSESSIONS: “... long white opera gloves covered her hands, a diamond necklace glittered around her lovely neck, and her strapless scarlet red gown had a slit just above her knee.” She eventually gets glass slippers from Snape.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Chapter one starts off with the scene from the World cup. Lucius is lusting after Rose, and she mocks him. When the Death Eaters show up their tent is burned by a dragon-like creature comprised of fire called a Fiendfyre before proceeding to continue on the same route. Chapter three is the interview Rita has with Harry and she brings up Rose and how there are rumors of them being in a relationship. In chapter four she takes Hermione's place in the tent. Chapter five has Rose mention being mad at Harry, and her getting to go to the Yule ball because “Muggles are permitted to join but only as a student's date, no exceptions.” She gets to go because Harry asks her to. Chapter six is about her reply. Chapter seven goes on about how Vernon's not let her have anything to do with the Wizarding world, but an exception is made for the Yule Ball. (What about the cup?) Punch spills on her shoes, and Hermione repairs them. Draco then asks her to dance, and Harry steps in and she is able to manipulate him for two dances. Harry and Rose then go walking in the enchanted gardens and they over hear Snape and Karkaroff. This time her new shoes break at the heal and she complains. She then gets a kiss from Harry. Pansy tries mouthing off, but Rose puts her into her place. Suddenly she's getting a dance with Snape as well. Snape lectures her about wearing shoes as it is rule. She then gets shoes from someone named Ms. Davis as “she will be detained in St. Mungo's for the next few weeks.” Tracey has the “Black Cat flue.” She then dances with Neville. (Each of these is their own chapter by the way for a total of fourteen. She then dances with a Durmstrange boy and Harry's not happy. “The Yule Ball ended at midnight. How cliché.” Rose feels like Cinderella, but has to go home. Harry says “you were my sun and my stars, the moon of my life, the air that I breath?” We then find out she's had sex with Harry already and he's the one she lost her virginity to. When is not made clear. It's a random info drop. They proceed to have sex again. I then found out the writer is writin this out of order. “I AM UPLOADING NEW CHAPTERS BUT IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER SO U'M AFRAID YOU'LL HAVE TO LOOK FOR THEM!” One of these pieces is Rita Skeeter-Part 1”
ORIGIN: The story is supposed to be a prequel.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “Rose hid a deep secret inside her since she was thirteen that only she, Harry, Sirius, and Dumbledore knew about. […] The last time someone was cursed (Blessed?( with Rose's secret a whole war was started over her.”
NOTES: I don't know why the writer calls their story a prequel. There is a disclaimer at the bottom saying “This is my Helen of Hogwarts story redone again!”
SAMPLE:
"I know." She drawled back, flipping her golden blonde hair over her shoulder. "Tell me how can you call yourself a Slytherin Malfoy?"
"Excuse me?"
"Well I hear you talk down about the Weasley Clan all the time and I wonder how a Slytherin can say that?" She continued, ignoring the warning squeeze Harry send her. "After all, isn't it one of Slytherin's mottos that 'There's safety in numbers'?"
"Yes." He carefully replied, a hint of confusion in his voice, his cold eyes still narrowed on her.
"And what of the Malfoy Clan?" She inquired, checking her nails in a show of nonchalance. "How many members do you have born, not wedded, into the line?"
Lucius stood silent finally figuring out where Rose was getting at. She grinned.
"I thought so. Three, you, your son, and your grandfather. That's all that exists of the great and powerful Malfoy Clan." She mocked as his eyes flashed in anger. "You're pathetic! You don't even have enough for one Quidditch team. And you know what I think Malfoy? You can't have another child and that's why you hate the Weasley Clan so much because they have what you can never have!"
Lucius's face hardened in rage. She could hear laughter and cheers from Ron and the twins.
"How dare you filthy-"
"You know, I would love to stay here with you and hear more insults to my person." She sarcastically said, rolling her eyes. "But the game's about to start and we have to head to our seats. Enjoy the show and remember to watch for rain."
Rose led Harry up the stairs, a satisfied smile on her face.
Here is the next “Don't Like, Don't Read” day.
TITLE: Kissed by a Rose Prequel
PERPETRATOR: firelily18
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: The picture is of a rose.
SUMMARY:”Rose Dursley, the only child of Mr. and Mrs. Dursley, isn't as normal as anyone suspects her to be. She holds many secrets, one of which is that she's in love with her cousin Harry Potter and another that is just too dangerous to even talk about. Fem!Dudley. WARNING: INCEST, MINORS AND NON CON! DON'T LIKE, DON'T READ! Fem! Dudley.”
FULL NAME: Rose Dursley
SPECIES: She is a female version of Dudley.
HAIR: “Her waist length golden blonde hair was freely let loose behind her back...”
EYES:
MARKINGS: “Harry was transfixed by Rose's beauty. She looked completely different from the nervous wrek the last time he saw her at the dragon task.” “She was, without a doubt, the most gourgeous creature Harry had ever laid eyes on.”
POSSESSIONS: “... long white opera gloves covered her hands, a diamond necklace glittered around her lovely neck, and her strapless scarlet red gown had a slit just above her knee.” She eventually gets glass slippers from Snape.
CONNECTION TO CANON: Chapter one starts off with the scene from the World cup. Lucius is lusting after Rose, and she mocks him. When the Death Eaters show up their tent is burned by a dragon-like creature comprised of fire called a Fiendfyre before proceeding to continue on the same route. Chapter three is the interview Rita has with Harry and she brings up Rose and how there are rumors of them being in a relationship. In chapter four she takes Hermione's place in the tent. Chapter five has Rose mention being mad at Harry, and her getting to go to the Yule ball because “Muggles are permitted to join but only as a student's date, no exceptions.” She gets to go because Harry asks her to. Chapter six is about her reply. Chapter seven goes on about how Vernon's not let her have anything to do with the Wizarding world, but an exception is made for the Yule Ball. (What about the cup?) Punch spills on her shoes, and Hermione repairs them. Draco then asks her to dance, and Harry steps in and she is able to manipulate him for two dances. Harry and Rose then go walking in the enchanted gardens and they over hear Snape and Karkaroff. This time her new shoes break at the heal and she complains. She then gets a kiss from Harry. Pansy tries mouthing off, but Rose puts her into her place. Suddenly she's getting a dance with Snape as well. Snape lectures her about wearing shoes as it is rule. She then gets shoes from someone named Ms. Davis as “she will be detained in St. Mungo's for the next few weeks.” Tracey has the “Black Cat flue.” She then dances with Neville. (Each of these is their own chapter by the way for a total of fourteen. She then dances with a Durmstrange boy and Harry's not happy. “The Yule Ball ended at midnight. How cliché.” Rose feels like Cinderella, but has to go home. Harry says “you were my sun and my stars, the moon of my life, the air that I breath?” We then find out she's had sex with Harry already and he's the one she lost her virginity to. When is not made clear. It's a random info drop. They proceed to have sex again. I then found out the writer is writin this out of order. “I AM UPLOADING NEW CHAPTERS BUT IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER SO U'M AFRAID YOU'LL HAVE TO LOOK FOR THEM!” One of these pieces is Rita Skeeter-Part 1”
ORIGIN: The story is supposed to be a prequel.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “Rose hid a deep secret inside her since she was thirteen that only she, Harry, Sirius, and Dumbledore knew about. […] The last time someone was cursed (Blessed?( with Rose's secret a whole war was started over her.”
NOTES: I don't know why the writer calls their story a prequel. There is a disclaimer at the bottom saying “This is my Helen of Hogwarts story redone again!”
SAMPLE:
"I know." She drawled back, flipping her golden blonde hair over her shoulder. "Tell me how can you call yourself a Slytherin Malfoy?"
"Excuse me?"
"Well I hear you talk down about the Weasley Clan all the time and I wonder how a Slytherin can say that?" She continued, ignoring the warning squeeze Harry send her. "After all, isn't it one of Slytherin's mottos that 'There's safety in numbers'?"
"Yes." He carefully replied, a hint of confusion in his voice, his cold eyes still narrowed on her.
"And what of the Malfoy Clan?" She inquired, checking her nails in a show of nonchalance. "How many members do you have born, not wedded, into the line?"
Lucius stood silent finally figuring out where Rose was getting at. She grinned.
"I thought so. Three, you, your son, and your grandfather. That's all that exists of the great and powerful Malfoy Clan." She mocked as his eyes flashed in anger. "You're pathetic! You don't even have enough for one Quidditch team. And you know what I think Malfoy? You can't have another child and that's why you hate the Weasley Clan so much because they have what you can never have!"
Lucius's face hardened in rage. She could hear laughter and cheers from Ron and the twins.
"How dare you filthy-"
"You know, I would love to stay here with you and hear more insults to my person." She sarcastically said, rolling her eyes. "But the game's about to start and we have to head to our seats. Enjoy the show and remember to watch for rain."
Rose led Harry up the stairs, a satisfied smile on her face.