3363: Mission: Voldemort - Nat, Sasuke, Ciel, Draco, Pansy
I found this for the link of the day. I was looking for the Flashback Sue. Many of you will likely recognize said Flashback Sue. Anyways... I read a blurb when I was doing random searches through the archive using the search feature and clicked on it without realizing it was that entry.
TITLE: Mission Voldemort
PERPETRATOR: AkatsukiDarkAngel
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: The cover art is a chibi Sasuke.
SUMMARY:”Nat is sent on a mission with her team mate Ciel and Sasuke to get Draco Malfoy. Little does she know he was going to get to her first. With other problems like the Akatsuki and Voldemort showing up a simple grab and go mission has become more complicated.”
FULL NAME: Nat, Sasuke, Ciel... Draco and Pansy
SPECIES: She is a member of Orochimaru's group. Actually... they are all members of said group. This includes Draco and Pansy. Nat is also a brat.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: I wish to make something clear. Sasuke is fifteen to seventeen during the second part of Naruto. Despite the fact he is this old he is trying to pass as a teacher and Nat is trying to pass as his assistant.
POSSESSIONS: Instead of buying a new costume, the Sue does this. “With a conniving smirk I pulled out my wand. With a wave her old school puffy pink princess dress transformed into a pale green form fitting dress with silver gloves, shoes, belt and tiara. She looked at herself in the mirror twirling around.” I thought the writer meant uniform, but then I read this.
CONNECTION TO CANON: They're there to kidnap Draco so that the Mary Sue can have two boyfriends instead of one. (I wish I wasn't serious about this... but that is the actual plot to this one.) They end up failing and yet are still able to join the other teachers and students as if nothing happens. It's a matter of “blending in better”. Despite being the assistant she gets to do most of the teaching. “I dragged my ring across closed eyes then down my right cheek to my chin. My black and gold mask covered most of my face; my hair cascaded down my back; though I put it up in a high ponytail. I wore a red corset with gold detailing, a short black skirt with thigh high boots and my special black hooded coat that buttoned just underneath my bust. Pansy starred at me with wide eyes as I left the room. My hood covered my face so she couldn't see me smiling at her.” Then again... the writer may actually think that having a mask with your ninja outfit only makes it even cooler. Eventually she gets kidnapped and mind controlled so she can lick Draco's dark mark and make him Voldemort's. (Can somebody please check out chapter seven to see if I read that right.) Sasuke shows up and rescues her then hands over his sword willingly to the Sue. We then get an angst ridden flashback where her father abandons her. They win and kill Voldemort. Draco and Pansey suddenly want to come too because they are free of Voldemort's control. That is the last chapter up.
ORIGIN: “'We're going undercover at a special school, get close to someone and steal something.'” So they pack up their bags for England. The Sue's lessons involves playing dress up with the other characters. They're pretty much teaching ninja schools.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “'You're a student,' Sasuke explained 'I'll be a teacher while Nat will be both my assistant and a student.'” Why would Sasuke have an assistant when the other teachers don't? Why would Dumbledore even let them in to be teachers. She is dating Sasuke, but also gets Draco. They are immune to spells. She is really good at using elemental magic with her wand. She recieves praise from Pansy for her awesome body.
NOTES: I took a gander at the writer's profile and saw the following note. “Looking for a specific character? They are matched with an original character of mine.”
SAMPLE:
"You want me to do WHAT!" I shrieked.
"Don't make me repeat myself," Orochimaru growled.
Orochimaru just told Sasuke and me what our new mission was. Storming past the prodigy out of Otochimaru's quarters I saw my partner leaning on the wall in front of me.
"You don't look all that happy," he snickered "Did you get sent on a dead end job?"
"Hardly," I leaned on the wall beside him "We're going on a trip. And here comes our superior now, the great Sasuke Uchiha."
He smirked "This could get interesting."
"Or painful."
"You, I don't mind Nat, it's your partner Ciel I'm worried about," Sasuke glanced at him.
"Then I'll be sure to do the job quickly."
"Is someone going to explain to me what the mission is?" Ciel demanded.
"We're going undercover at a special school, get close to someone and steal something."
"Sounds easy enough."
"You're a student," Sasuke explained "I'll be a teacher while Nat will be both my assistant and a student."
"Why can't you do the student assistant past and I'll be the teacher," I complained.
"Because this is what we've been given."
"Right, so where is this school?" Ciel interrupted.
"England."
"Then what are we waiting for?"
Before we could complain he was off to his room. I went to kiss Sasuke's cheek then left myself. I knew he liked me and I like him. We didn't want Orochimaru to know or else he'll exploit it so I act like I hate him most of the time.
TITLE: Mission Voldemort
PERPETRATOR: AkatsukiDarkAngel
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: The cover art is a chibi Sasuke.
SUMMARY:”Nat is sent on a mission with her team mate Ciel and Sasuke to get Draco Malfoy. Little does she know he was going to get to her first. With other problems like the Akatsuki and Voldemort showing up a simple grab and go mission has become more complicated.”
FULL NAME: Nat, Sasuke, Ciel... Draco and Pansy
SPECIES: She is a member of Orochimaru's group. Actually... they are all members of said group. This includes Draco and Pansy. Nat is also a brat.
HAIR: n/a
EYES: n/a
MARKINGS: I wish to make something clear. Sasuke is fifteen to seventeen during the second part of Naruto. Despite the fact he is this old he is trying to pass as a teacher and Nat is trying to pass as his assistant.
POSSESSIONS: Instead of buying a new costume, the Sue does this. “With a conniving smirk I pulled out my wand. With a wave her old school puffy pink princess dress transformed into a pale green form fitting dress with silver gloves, shoes, belt and tiara. She looked at herself in the mirror twirling around.” I thought the writer meant uniform, but then I read this.
CONNECTION TO CANON: They're there to kidnap Draco so that the Mary Sue can have two boyfriends instead of one. (I wish I wasn't serious about this... but that is the actual plot to this one.) They end up failing and yet are still able to join the other teachers and students as if nothing happens. It's a matter of “blending in better”. Despite being the assistant she gets to do most of the teaching. “I dragged my ring across closed eyes then down my right cheek to my chin. My black and gold mask covered most of my face; my hair cascaded down my back; though I put it up in a high ponytail. I wore a red corset with gold detailing, a short black skirt with thigh high boots and my special black hooded coat that buttoned just underneath my bust. Pansy starred at me with wide eyes as I left the room. My hood covered my face so she couldn't see me smiling at her.” Then again... the writer may actually think that having a mask with your ninja outfit only makes it even cooler. Eventually she gets kidnapped and mind controlled so she can lick Draco's dark mark and make him Voldemort's. (Can somebody please check out chapter seven to see if I read that right.) Sasuke shows up and rescues her then hands over his sword willingly to the Sue. We then get an angst ridden flashback where her father abandons her. They win and kill Voldemort. Draco and Pansey suddenly want to come too because they are free of Voldemort's control. That is the last chapter up.
ORIGIN: “'We're going undercover at a special school, get close to someone and steal something.'” So they pack up their bags for England. The Sue's lessons involves playing dress up with the other characters. They're pretty much teaching ninja schools.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “'You're a student,' Sasuke explained 'I'll be a teacher while Nat will be both my assistant and a student.'” Why would Sasuke have an assistant when the other teachers don't? Why would Dumbledore even let them in to be teachers. She is dating Sasuke, but also gets Draco. They are immune to spells. She is really good at using elemental magic with her wand. She recieves praise from Pansy for her awesome body.
NOTES: I took a gander at the writer's profile and saw the following note. “Looking for a specific character? They are matched with an original character of mine.”
SAMPLE:
"You want me to do WHAT!" I shrieked.
"Don't make me repeat myself," Orochimaru growled.
Orochimaru just told Sasuke and me what our new mission was. Storming past the prodigy out of Otochimaru's quarters I saw my partner leaning on the wall in front of me.
"You don't look all that happy," he snickered "Did you get sent on a dead end job?"
"Hardly," I leaned on the wall beside him "We're going on a trip. And here comes our superior now, the great Sasuke Uchiha."
He smirked "This could get interesting."
"Or painful."
"You, I don't mind Nat, it's your partner Ciel I'm worried about," Sasuke glanced at him.
"Then I'll be sure to do the job quickly."
"Is someone going to explain to me what the mission is?" Ciel demanded.
"We're going undercover at a special school, get close to someone and steal something."
"Sounds easy enough."
"You're a student," Sasuke explained "I'll be a teacher while Nat will be both my assistant and a student."
"Why can't you do the student assistant past and I'll be the teacher," I complained.
"Because this is what we've been given."
"Right, so where is this school?" Ciel interrupted.
"England."
"Then what are we waiting for?"
Before we could complain he was off to his room. I went to kiss Sasuke's cheek then left myself. I knew he liked me and I like him. We didn't want Orochimaru to know or else he'll exploit it so I act like I hate him most of the time.