3267: Silver Opportunities - Kaiden the false titled, Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy
I had planned on posting an entry yesterday but by the time I got to the entry I was tired from the activities of the forth. I then went to do up the entry for the forth entry for Prophesy Week and found myself not in the mood with me being as tired as I was. I mean... where to begin with this.
- Don't forget about this!
- I couldn't find a rant about creature-fics or creature inheritances but found this instead. It works to for the link of the day.
- The third Flashback Sue is the only other story that featured a Griffin Creature Stu.
TITLE: Silver Opportunities
PERPETRATOR: GeminiCancer
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a clip of their avatar which is of Draco trying to kiss Harry.
SUMMARY:”Summery: the prophesy Harry knew was fake. The real prophesy is about a Griffin and his mates Oc/hp/dm slash”
FULL NAME: Kaiden, Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy
SPECIES: Kaiden is a griffin. Harry and Draco are both his mates.
HAIR: See markings...
EYES: “Harry let him walk up to him. The man was only slightly taller than him so he didn't have to look up much to meet his eyes. They were dark brown, so dark they were almost black, the darkest of chocolates, Harry was mesmerized by those eyes.”
MARKINGS: “'Don't be afraid.' the man speaking was, well, hot! He was wearing nothing but a loin cloth, his muscles large and well defined. Caramel colored skin and beautiful black hair that hung loose around his face and shoulders. His facial features were strong and bold, warm but not soft. Harry knew this man was not someone to mess with. His bearing was like Lucius Malfoy and screamed breeding and royalty.”
POSSESSIONS: Harry and Draco of course.
CONNECTION TO CANON: After finding out that he has two mates Kaiden proceeds to stalk them and instead of finding his behavior disturbing the other griffen's find it amusing and treat it as if said behavior is cute. In the mean time they have a run in with the centaurs. They're able to roam free because one of he ends up becoming the owner of Hogwarts. Then we flash to Harry who has a flash back to when he turned of age... at age sixteen by the way. He also dreams of Kaiden and is completely fine with this guy making the claim that he is his mate. He wakes and then wishes that Kaiden really was coming for him. He then has more dreams. Malfoy is in this and they're called “prince” and while both freak out that time, they are both fine with that. He then starts calling Ron and Hermione “bastards” in his mind for no reason, because “he was still put out that neither she nor Ron had owled him all summer long”. He then sees them announce Kaiden's presence and Snape makes Dumbledore look bad and he gets to claim the two.
ORIGIN: “[Kaiden] felt when the first had come of age and welcomed him in his dream that night, satisfied that he had a strong and beautiful mate. […] A month later, he had been shocked to discover that he had another mate as the second came of age.” Despite Kaiden being a griffen, he is referred to as a man.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “[Kaiden] Shadows' had been shocked and proud that their leader had two mates; it was a sign of the Great One and proof that they had trials ahead and would need the power.” “He'd heard them calling from across the ocean.” (So... this means he's from America, right?) Even the Centaurs call him the “Great One”. Kaiden's importance is that Hogwarts has accepted him, making him the owner of the building. His title is now... “Great One, Prince Kaiden of the Silver Griffins and Owner of Hogwarts”.
NOTES: Since the Harry Potter world bases creatures off their mythological counterparts a griffin is like this. I really didn't get past the first chapter. The character and canon assassinations on this one were enough to get it the toxic rating with the first chapter and while conceit would be a great fault for Kaiden, he also gets his way
SAMPLE:
He stood still, waiting, watching the children from across the lake, hidden behind the trees of the Forest. He could smell them, their scent intoxicating even from this distance. He couldn't tell where it was coming from, specifically, only that they were with the other students. He heard Cristoff shift his weight slightly on his left, the other man's only expression of his impatience, and sensed Weidler's amusement at Cristoff's actions. They were brothers, sworn at birth to be his shadow for life, their only duty his protection.
They had followed obediently his whole life, through every misdeed and trial with him through success and failure, although there hadn't been many of those, they were his loyal ones his Heart's Shadows and, now, they were with him to find his mates so he could take his rightful place.
He knew they were here, at this wizards' school in Scotland, he knew that there were two and that they were waiting for him, but he didn't know how he was going to get them away from here. He furrowed his brow in concentration; he would not dream of asking his shadows' for their thoughts, which was unfortunate as Cristoff was a superb strategist and Weidler's half baked ideas generally, provoked a decent plan from his own mind. This was something he had to prove on his own. They were his mates to claim and protect. His shadows' wouldn't even be here if they had anywhere else to be.
Perhaps, he should have spoken to the headmaster as was his original plan, but that felt as though he was asking for assistance. In addition, this headmaster was manipulative and conniving, asking for help from him was tantamount to placing himself in another's control was unacceptable.
He watched as the children split up, the majority getting in wagons pulled by thestrals and the smallest getting on boats and heading across the lake. His mates scent faded slightly which relaxed him somewhat, he knew that his mates were not among this bunch. He'd heard them calling from across the ocean. He'd felt when the first had come of age and welcomed him in his dream that night, satisfied that he had a strong and beautiful mate.
A month later, he had been shocked to discover that he had another mate as the second came of age. He had pulled his first with him to welcome the other. They complemented each other; one dark and the other light, both extraordinarily beautiful and powerful, although the second mate's power was mental, as it should be. His Shadows' had been shocked and proud that their leader had two mates; it was a sign of the Great One and proof that they had trials ahead and would need the power.
He sighed almost imperceptibly but his shadow's caught it. His mates were headed into the school and not towards the forest as he'd hoped. He would have to enter the school to collect his mates. Decision made, he faded deeper into the forest to gather his thoughts.
- Don't forget about this!
- I couldn't find a rant about creature-fics or creature inheritances but found this instead. It works to for the link of the day.
- The third Flashback Sue is the only other story that featured a Griffin Creature Stu.
TITLE: Silver Opportunities
PERPETRATOR: GeminiCancer
SUE-O-METER:
(toxic)
COVER/BANNER ART: It is a clip of their avatar which is of Draco trying to kiss Harry.
SUMMARY:”Summery: the prophesy Harry knew was fake. The real prophesy is about a Griffin and his mates Oc/hp/dm slash”
FULL NAME: Kaiden, Harry Potter, Draco Malfoy
SPECIES: Kaiden is a griffin. Harry and Draco are both his mates.
HAIR: See markings...
EYES: “Harry let him walk up to him. The man was only slightly taller than him so he didn't have to look up much to meet his eyes. They were dark brown, so dark they were almost black, the darkest of chocolates, Harry was mesmerized by those eyes.”
MARKINGS: “'Don't be afraid.' the man speaking was, well, hot! He was wearing nothing but a loin cloth, his muscles large and well defined. Caramel colored skin and beautiful black hair that hung loose around his face and shoulders. His facial features were strong and bold, warm but not soft. Harry knew this man was not someone to mess with. His bearing was like Lucius Malfoy and screamed breeding and royalty.”
POSSESSIONS: Harry and Draco of course.
CONNECTION TO CANON: After finding out that he has two mates Kaiden proceeds to stalk them and instead of finding his behavior disturbing the other griffen's find it amusing and treat it as if said behavior is cute. In the mean time they have a run in with the centaurs. They're able to roam free because one of he ends up becoming the owner of Hogwarts. Then we flash to Harry who has a flash back to when he turned of age... at age sixteen by the way. He also dreams of Kaiden and is completely fine with this guy making the claim that he is his mate. He wakes and then wishes that Kaiden really was coming for him. He then has more dreams. Malfoy is in this and they're called “prince” and while both freak out that time, they are both fine with that. He then starts calling Ron and Hermione “bastards” in his mind for no reason, because “he was still put out that neither she nor Ron had owled him all summer long”. He then sees them announce Kaiden's presence and Snape makes Dumbledore look bad and he gets to claim the two.
ORIGIN: “[Kaiden] felt when the first had come of age and welcomed him in his dream that night, satisfied that he had a strong and beautiful mate. […] A month later, he had been shocked to discover that he had another mate as the second came of age.” Despite Kaiden being a griffen, he is referred to as a man.
SPECIAL ABILITIES: “[Kaiden] Shadows' had been shocked and proud that their leader had two mates; it was a sign of the Great One and proof that they had trials ahead and would need the power.” “He'd heard them calling from across the ocean.” (So... this means he's from America, right?) Even the Centaurs call him the “Great One”. Kaiden's importance is that Hogwarts has accepted him, making him the owner of the building. His title is now... “Great One, Prince Kaiden of the Silver Griffins and Owner of Hogwarts”.
NOTES: Since the Harry Potter world bases creatures off their mythological counterparts a griffin is like this. I really didn't get past the first chapter. The character and canon assassinations on this one were enough to get it the toxic rating with the first chapter and while conceit would be a great fault for Kaiden, he also gets his way
SAMPLE:
He stood still, waiting, watching the children from across the lake, hidden behind the trees of the Forest. He could smell them, their scent intoxicating even from this distance. He couldn't tell where it was coming from, specifically, only that they were with the other students. He heard Cristoff shift his weight slightly on his left, the other man's only expression of his impatience, and sensed Weidler's amusement at Cristoff's actions. They were brothers, sworn at birth to be his shadow for life, their only duty his protection.
They had followed obediently his whole life, through every misdeed and trial with him through success and failure, although there hadn't been many of those, they were his loyal ones his Heart's Shadows and, now, they were with him to find his mates so he could take his rightful place.
He knew they were here, at this wizards' school in Scotland, he knew that there were two and that they were waiting for him, but he didn't know how he was going to get them away from here. He furrowed his brow in concentration; he would not dream of asking his shadows' for their thoughts, which was unfortunate as Cristoff was a superb strategist and Weidler's half baked ideas generally, provoked a decent plan from his own mind. This was something he had to prove on his own. They were his mates to claim and protect. His shadows' wouldn't even be here if they had anywhere else to be.
Perhaps, he should have spoken to the headmaster as was his original plan, but that felt as though he was asking for assistance. In addition, this headmaster was manipulative and conniving, asking for help from him was tantamount to placing himself in another's control was unacceptable.
He watched as the children split up, the majority getting in wagons pulled by thestrals and the smallest getting on boats and heading across the lake. His mates scent faded slightly which relaxed him somewhat, he knew that his mates were not among this bunch. He'd heard them calling from across the ocean. He'd felt when the first had come of age and welcomed him in his dream that night, satisfied that he had a strong and beautiful mate.
A month later, he had been shocked to discover that he had another mate as the second came of age. He had pulled his first with him to welcome the other. They complemented each other; one dark and the other light, both extraordinarily beautiful and powerful, although the second mate's power was mental, as it should be. His Shadows' had been shocked and proud that their leader had two mates; it was a sign of the Great One and proof that they had trials ahead and would need the power.
He sighed almost imperceptibly but his shadow's caught it. His mates were headed into the school and not towards the forest as he'd hoped. He would have to enter the school to collect his mates. Decision made, he faded deeper into the forest to gather his thoughts.